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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Recurious%s's Photo
    This is very nice. Buildings are a bit blocky maybe and could use some more details imo, but overall nice. Also maybe try to add some more detailing to the path to break it up a little. There are some details now but I feel like it could use some more.
  • Airtime%s's Photo
    Really nice! I like it!

    I think if you broke the path up a little, maybe line the trees or areas near the buildings would a different texture it would really elevate this.

    Maybe even an additional accent of colour in addition to just white or green. Or separate the building colours up a little?
  • Faas%s's Photo
    Looks cool, I like the consistency of textures and colours. I think your foliage could use some work, check out this topic for tips:

    https://www.nedesign...-fucking-donts/
  • batwing%s's Photo
    Thanks!! Tips are welcome! It’s been a while....
  • Jene%s's Photo

    This is such a cool idea for a park. Could be really good! I like what you've started with. Nice little details like the net at the monorail station and the sign. My advice would be to watch out with too many different types of fences, it tends to make it incoherent and unnecessary messy. 

  • Xtreme97%s's Photo

    This is pretty nice, the green roof is a good combo with the subtle brick texture and this definitely teases the park nicely. Be careful with your choice of tree trunk colour, a lot of the ones here differ from the vanilla rct colours which makes them seem off. The chinese cedar and the silver birch in particular.

  • In:Cities%s's Photo

    Dude this is absolutely lovely. Fantastic work!

  • Coaster-GEOFF%s's Photo

    nice work! I like the station very much... Not a fan of the hats though... makes it ala bit to monotonous..

  • ottersalad%s's Photo

    Nice stuff. Monorail station is great

  • Mattk48%s's Photo

    I think you have a great screen here, just needs a little polish. You should vary your roof and detail colors, not every building has to be green. Love the monorail station. The Building with the shake roofs kinda looks like it should be a centerpiece, and if thats the case the scale is 1-2 units too small on that. Would make that higher to stand out. A second path type might help break up the crazy paving.

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    Batwing? You're the Batwing I'm thinking of, right?

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    Nice cozy transport hub.  Good stuff.

  • batwing%s's Photo

    Batwing? You're the Batwing I'm thinking of, right?


    Wow! I never knew this was still online!! I’ve been looking for this for ages!! Thanks Liam! And yes. That’s me. Like I said... It’s been a while :)

    Everyone: thanks for the tips and help! I have made a few adjustments and I’m pretty sure more will follow. Good tips!! Thanks!
  • spacek531%s's Photo

    Tony's Chocolonely, it's my favorite kind of chocolate

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    Really like this so far! The builing shapes are well done, as are the architectural details and the consistency here.

     

    I would like to add to the comments about colours though, I think it needs a pop out colour, some sort of accent. Perhaps you can achieve this by making some flower beds? 

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    So it is you! Good to see you're building again. The screen definitely shows some experience with the game. The one thing I'm not keen on is the foliage, it's a little messy and scattered. And moreover a lot of your trees have weird trunk colours. If you make the birch trunks grey instead of white for example, it'll look a lot more natural.

     

    I like that you took this concept btw. Be careful with the architectural style though, this stuff strikes me as quite Americanized.

     

    Looking forward to seeing more.

  • MrTycoonCoaster%s's Photo

    very good

  • RCThibo%s's Photo

    Wow, I had no idea Tony's Chocolonely was Dutch, you learn something new every day.

    This looks pretty good, if a bit blocky. It reminds me of a blend between American realism and Concurrenten-style Dutch building. Keep up the good work.

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