Screenshot / Cedar Creek Park - Starfire + Americana + Employee Parking

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  alex Offline

  Really liking how this coaster is placed, also from the screens you posted on discord.
  
  I think you might have a bit too much fencing and railings, in particular I don't know if you need all the rope fences for the parking spaces, nor the railing around the train track.

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  Xtreme97 Offline

  Nice work, you've really improved the layout a lot with the diagonal bits and this turnaround. If that road in the back goes to an employee area, perhaps consider a security booth of come kind with a barrier.

  posted 4 years ago

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  FK+Coastermind Offline

  Overall I like the composition, particularly the placing of the coaster and the helix element. But I do feel like there are a lot of rough edges, like some of the paths and fences, the go-kart ramp down feels like the fences next to it should be higher, and the top of the woodie feels awkward, particularly the way the supports are falling.

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  ottersalad Offline

  I agree with Alex and FK.. too many fences and the trees under coaster supports are bad. If you remove some textures, this will look a lot cleaner. Definitely a well composed screen otherwise

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  Coasterbill Offline

  I like this! Try to break the grid a little if possible though.

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  Dark_Horse Offline

  Great turnaround on the yellow coaster. I like how it hia the hillside before ascending.

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