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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • robbie92%s's Photo

    Really loving the colours on this, that purple looks amazing. 

  • dr dirt%s's Photo
    Shows talent
  • ottersalad%s's Photo

    Cool diagonal piers. Really dig the coaster layout as well.

  • MrTycoonCoaster%s's Photo

    I liked the station very good

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    The coaster and docks look great; the architecture is a bit all over the place. Might be a bit better with a little more cohesion between buildings.

  • Astroturd%s's Photo

    Glad to hear the colors and layout are appreciated. They are also my favorite parts.


    The coaster and docks look great; the architecture is a bit all over the place. Might be a bit better with a little more cohesion between buildings.

    I agree on the architecture. My original vision was a shanty town of ad-hoc buildings, but I didn't really achieve that. I could make everything the style of the station building to bring the cohesion as you say. I think I could also go the other direction and introduce more variety to get closer to the original idea.

    Thanks for the feedback everyone!

  • hoobaroo%s's Photo
    the dynamic composition of intertwining path, coaster and landscaping, along with an interesting concept, leaves me interested to see more from you. Something to consider working on would be your transitions; making the area as a whole seem more integrated with the map as a whole, i.e. the pathway leading up to it, or the local scenery around the area. cool stuff.
  • nin%s's Photo

    Interesting composition, and that purple is so slick. 

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    It took me a second to figure out the perspective on the jetties, but it eventually clicked.  That's a really nice little family coaster layout.

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