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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • In:Cities%s's Photo
    Wow dude I love this!
    Maybe try some diagonal steps instead of the roof texture?

    The clock thing is so sick
  • trav%s's Photo

    Oh yeah that's the good stuff

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    Not as good as the other screen, but every element in this screen is very good! The clock is great.

     

    Maybe it's the crop, but judging from this screen the area lacks any focal points. There's nothing to draw my attention.

     

    The one thing I dislike is the placement of the 2x2 blue building in the middle, right behind the \/\/\/\/ sign. It aligns in a bad way. Can you swap the building witht he red flower planter behind, detaching the building and the sign?

  • Xtreme97%s's Photo
    Agree with Liam about the 2x2, I thought the VVV sign was part of building at first and it was a weird perspective trick.

    Love the clock, looks so clean! Also really like the subtle curve in the coaster station roof.
  • Dark_Horse%s's Photo

    Not a fan of the tile roof steps or the colors.  It's an entrance area, could do with more splashes of color.

  • ottersalad%s's Photo
    Gritty old school stuff. I’m a fan, as usual
  • hydroportal%s's Photo
    Bro are you kidding me? How tf did you do that clock? I agree with Liam about the alignment thing and also i think using the stairs pieces will also boost this park a lot. All else, very charming and i love the tone youve set for this park. Great job fitting in that round up. Phenomenal stuff and please send me the save again thanks.
  • Louis!%s's Photo

    wonderful

  • G Force%s's Photo

    Not as good as the other screen, but every element in this screen is very good! The clock is great.
     
    Maybe it's the crop, but judging from this screen the area lacks any focal points. There's nothing to draw my attention.
     
    The one thing I dislike is the placement of the 2x2 blue building in the middle, right behind the \/\/\/\/ sign. It aligns in a bad way. Can you swap the building witht he red flower planter behind, detaching the building and the sign?


    Yeahhhh, I was curious how that would come off, it'll be changed to improve readability.

    As for the stairs, I'll test some things out. Like I said in the last screen I'd love a plain textured version of those pieces ideally, to avoid having stairs entirely.


    Thanks for the feedback everyone. Keeping me motivated!
  • Steve%s's Photo

    Could be the crop also, but I think for me what's missing is some taller trees towards the top of the screen near/around the swinger. Feels a little empty compared to the rest of the area that has some taller foliage flanking almost everything else.

     

    Speaking of everything else, it's great. Glad to see you back at RCT again, dude!

  • Sulakke%s's Photo

    Great screen. I agree with everyone else about the readability of the sign and the shop. I like the vastness of the grey path, but it is really empty right now, while it would be full of peeps in real life. Maybe add some kind of little scene there? An entertainer surrounded by peeps or a small ice cream vendor or promotion stand?

  • Dark_Horse%s's Photo

    Also not a fan of the Sidewinder being in front of the entrance.  Swinger could use some more swings too.

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