Screenshot / a more gentle area

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Poke%s's Photo

    I feel that building to the left should have a purpose. I would delete the walls on the roof too. I don't particularly like the trackitecture either. This is probably your best work so far though.

  • trav%s's Photo

    It's pleasant although a coaster that small wouldn't need a transfer track as far as I'm concerned. 

  • Lotte%s's Photo


    I feel that building to the left should have a purpose. I would delete the walls on the roof too. I don't particularly like the trackitecture either. This is probably your best work so far though.

     

     

    i was going to make it a shop that sells candy and that sort of stuff, maybe i should make it more clear. and what kind of roof would you suggest i use for the station? also thanks for the compliment :)

     


    It's pleasant although a coaster that small wouldn't need a transfer track as far as I'm concerned. 

    the thing i was going for was more of a spare track thing. you know like a storage space. 

  • trav%s's Photo

    Storage for what?

  • Lotte%s's Photo

    i don't know, for when trains retire or just when brakes need replacements. guess i'll take it out

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    Yeah a coaster that size wouldn't need a strorage track. It would only have one train which would be stored in the station.

     

    The only exceptions to this are Wacky Worms that run on a turntable. They have more than 1 train, but they run on a turntable, not a block system.

     

    Anyway, not keen on the red flowers, the rest is nice though :)

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    I'm really curious as to how that transfer track would work. There's no room for it to slide and no room for the track before or after it to slide. Otherwise it's a very nice screen. 

  • Chocotopian%s's Photo

    Yeah, I'm not sure you've quite grasped the mechanics of the transfer track here, so I would suggest removing it.  You've certainly got the calming feeling going on that you were aiming for, so that's good.  And I also like the boarder of trees around the area.

  • Lotte%s's Photo

    how is this guys?

     

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  • Ling%s's Photo

    I like. I'm curious why you have a building with nothing in it next to two uncovered shops. Are you not using 8cars for this or something?

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    Better, but I think I preferred the fountain you had rather than the playground.

  • Lotte%s's Photo


    I like. I'm curious why you have a building with nothing in it next to two uncovered shops. Are you not using 8cars for this or something?

     

     

    the building actually has 3 shops in it. i picked those shops because they feel like actual stalls and that makes everything a bit more alive.

     


    Better, but I think I preferred the fountain you had rather than the playground.

     

    but... but.. it even has a football field :(, you could've been the entertainer who's supposed to represent the coach there louis! 

  • Faas%s's Photo

    Cool idea, but a football field in between two rollercoasters seems a bit dangerous. 

  • trav%s's Photo

    I prefer the playground, gives a lot more vibrancy to the area as a whole, which it definitely needed to bring it out of just being 'pleasant'. 

  • Poke%s's Photo

    Very cute work. 

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