Screenshot / Riverdale Amusement Park (WIP)

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  posted 10 years ago

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  Chocotopian Offline

  It would be nice to see the entrance gate finished a bit more, and I'm not quite sure what the floating fences are doing near the trees at the map edge.  Having aisles for the tickets is a neat idea though, but I think there needs to be an exit route so that those who have got their tickets don't need to walk back past the queuing people.  What are your plans for the rest of this area?

  posted 10 years ago

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  csw Offline

  While it's definitely not bad, I would consider finishing your screens more before asking for critique. What's important is that you build what you feel looks nice, and we can critique the details later. 

  posted 10 years ago

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  
  

  While it's definitely not bad, I would consider finishing your screens more before asking for critique. What's important is that you build what you feel looks nice, and we can critique the details later. 

   

   

  Definitely this.  Congrats on posting the obligatory unfinished entrance screen - now move on to the meaty bits.

  posted 10 years ago

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  Stoksy Offline

  ^. 

  Really do need more in a screen to get any sort of meaningful feedback.

  posted 10 years ago

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  Faas Offline

  Because of the bland colours, the chimneys and the brick, it doesn't look like a theme park. More like a factory or a POW camp. 

  posted 10 years ago

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