Park / Outlaw

  • 20-April 12
Park_2304 Outlaw

14 Comments

  • Comment System%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Comment System Offline
    posted 12 years ago
  • trav%s's Photo
    United Kingdom trav Offline
    Your architecture and landscaping leave a lot to be desired, but you have good ideas and the layout was good.

    Overall an enjoyable design which would have been boarderline with me if I were to vote.
    posted 12 years ago
  • 111112oo%s's Photo
    Australia 111112oo Offline
    Aww, I'm sad how this got a low score. It felt unique, it had a very nice atmosphere and it felt very real. Should of scored slightly higher. Anyway congrats on your first accolade!
    posted 12 years ago
  • Xtreme97%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Xtreme97 Online
    Big congrats on your first accolade That Guy!
    This design had lots of little things and ideas that really added charm to it; the people having a picnic in the mountains, the little queue buildings, the neat cabin near the river, the rock climbing wall, the caves in the mountains. And I loved the Wilderness Express and all the little details put in and around that ride.
    However the station was too brown and chaotic. Also, your foliage was a little repetitive.
    Aside from that, this was a very nice design and I can't wait to see upcoming work :)
    Btw lovely logo, verti.
    posted 12 years ago
  • nin%s's Photo
    United States nin Offline
    I thought this was really good. Needed peeps to bring the atmosphere all the way across, though.

    This reassures me of your skills, and I'm glad you're on the Replacements. :)
    posted 12 years ago
  • Angroc%s's Photo
    Norway Angroc Offline
    Loved the railway. It works well as a compositional element, and i like the way it's nested into the park. Great work!!!!
    posted 12 years ago
  • SoCalCoasters%s's Photo
    United States SoCalCoasters Offline
    Congrats on the Design!

    I have to say I really like the ride and the Shoot the Chutes. The Trestle style exit ramp was a nice touch. And hats off to the creator of that fabulous logo!
    posted 12 years ago
  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo
    United States CoasterCreator9 Offline
    Congratulations!

    Criticisms I can think of have been noted already, but something I really liked was the station detail - the two bins for a rider's loose articles - that was cool.
    posted 12 years ago
  • Cocoa%s's Photo
    Australia Cocoa Offline
    congrats fellow replacement! :D

    overall quite a nice design. the architeture was OK overall, it certainly got the job done, and your foliage and realistic detailing are quite nice. the landscaping was really the highlight here.
    posted 12 years ago
  • Fizzix%s's Photo
    United States Fizzix Offline
    I agree Cocoa. Congrats That Guy! This was definitely long overdue. The ride design itself was fantastic, but the surrounding area could use some work. The architecture I found a bit monotonous in color and bland in form. I especially didn't care for the station. The landscaping was pulled off well, and it's easy to imagine being here or riding Outlaw, soaring through the trees. Overall, an enjoyable release. Congrats again, and hey, we both scored 67.31%!
    posted 12 years ago
  • Whitehawk%s's Photo
    Whitehawk Offline
    This is gorgeous. All I can complain about is no peeps!
    posted 12 years ago
  • chorkiel%s's Photo
    Netherlands chorkiel Offline
    This definetely was beautifull piece of work. Well deserved accolade!
    Gratz on the first, and hopefully many to come ;)
    posted 12 years ago
  • posix%s's Photo
    Germany posix Offline
    This was wonderful and is exactly what the site needs more of: charming design through imaginativeness. Enough with the replication detailism! I was too slow to get a chance to vote on this and I'm sad this didn't receive a higher score.
    posted 12 years ago
  • Jazz%s's Photo
    United States Jazz Offline
    I think it's excellent. best design in a long time
    posted 12 years ago
  • That Guy%s's Photo
    United States That Guy Offline
    Trav - Architecture is certainly my weakest point, but I'm a bit disappointed you didn't like the landscaping because that was my real focus on this design.

    111112oo - Thanks, dude!

    Xtreme97 - Yeah, I wanted to do some cool things with the foliage but there was just a lot of space to fill. Some parts of foliage were more carefully selected than others based on where people would really be paying attention. Glad you liked it, though!

    nin - Yep, something went wrong very early on when I was building Iola and the peeps couldn't enter. I will be bringing peeps into all of my other creations hopefully, that was just a fluke.

    Angroc - Yep, the railway was a big piece to this design, I thought. I had some really good interactions before I cut down the map, it was just too far out of the way to leave in unless I wanted a huge map for the design.

    SoCalCoasters - Thanks!

    CC9 - Yeah, stations or architecture just in general isn't my thing. I'm glad that somebody liked it though. :)

    Cocoa - Yep, and that was the main focus. Thanks, bro.

    Fizzix - I agree with all of your points. I really just wanted to get this the fuck out of the way. And I submitted it just before H2H was announced so it worked out great.

    Whitehawk - Yep something happened and I couldn't get them in, otherwise I would've. Thanks, though!

    chorkiel - Thanks, chorkles. :)

    posix - Haha I figured you would like it, I too was disappointed you didn't get the opportunity to vote on it, you were one of the names I was waiting for.

    Jazz - Thanks, means a lot.

    Thanks to everybody that commented on this on the topic and thanks very much to Verti for the kickass logo, couldn't have asked for a better one.
    posted 12 years ago