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Transmission...
... Sub: Building concepts
... To: Gen. Patton
... Date: October 15, 2024
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Concept design of the new TechFederation Complex is moving forward as planned. Attached is part of a drawing of the first building to be constructed. This building will be the main office building throughout the station, and will serve as the hub of all TF Staff.
Please note that the attached sketch is not final, but is much larger than shown. The building features two such towers, as well as a substantial middle section.
Within the week we hope to have more to offer, but unexpected delays may occur. I will do my best to keep this project running smoothly, and we hope to have the complex and flight simulator complete before the end of November.
Dr. Grey
Project Administrator
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TechFederation Concept Art:
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Transmission...
... Sub: RE: Building concepts
... To: Dr. Grey
... Date: October 15, 2024
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I appreciate you message, Dr. Grey, and I'm hopeful for your progress. I must warn you, however, that we need this installation to be completed as quickly as possible, but still to yours and our own high expectations.
Keep me informed of your progress.
Gen. Patton
TechFederation Administration
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Transmission...
... Sub: RE: Building concepts
... To: Gen. Patton
... Date: October 16, 2024
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I assure you, General, that this project will be completed, by any means necessary. I understand the consequences of failure, but that will not be a problem.
I know it isn't much, but here is another section of the concept art we've drawn up for the office/personell building. The building from the last message has been since completed, and I will inform you of furthur progress.
Dr. Grey
Project Administrator
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TechFederation Office/Personell Building Concept Art:
TechFederation Training Facility
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I'm now about 75% complete with this, but that remaining 25% is the coaster...Which is proving to be very difficult. In anycase, please comment on the screens above. I've worked really hard on this, and I think it's my best work to date. Oh, and yes, it was inspired by Titan's X2.
EDIT:
YAY! No complaints. I like it very very very much.
Those screens remind me a lot of Titan's X-Men park, which is a good thing.
Anyway, the screens are wondeful. I don't like those cycads in the first screen though. They seem out of place, and I personally think they are ugly.
Great work, though.
That is all.
BTW, I forget to say that this is 50x50 (my first completed park), and will feature one coaster, which is planned to fly through a city-ish thing, while making several inversions and the like. Something like a flight simulator, as mentioned in the first post/transmission.
Blah, I've typed too much today, and I'm making no sense at all.
Certain aspects look completely the same. Still, imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, i suppose...
I'd still like you to try something completely new. Sure, it takes skill to build what you have done, but it takes even more skill to build a completely new theme...
Richie Offline
It looks good. Very. Although its not as easy to copy someones work as people think, it still is too heavily influenced. Still finish this, just try to keep the underwater tunnel out eh?
Your next peice of work should be your ideas, mixed with more and more of your ideas. Its much more rewarding in the end.
In any case, I'll be working on the coaster alot more tonight, and I'll have an update once I think I've done enough. This will be the last update though, since it is a small park.
Thanks for all the comments and suggestions.
Don't wanna type it all right now.
Anyway, here's the coaster, before theming.
I think you could add a flower bed where the supports are in the middle.
Thanks for the comment though.