Park / Montu

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  • alex%s's Photo

    It's great that you're going through a productive patch at the moment Shotguns.

     

    Some of this was very beautiful, other parts I found a bit messy and unrefined. Specifically I found the supports really chaotic - i counted like 4 different methods going on. Kudos for experimenting and trying to find new NCSO ways of making supports but I think I would've stuck with a combination of the diagonal poles and the default. Then I also thought some of the smaller architecture wasn't up to your usual standard, in particular the 2x2 tiled roof structures. The forms were too simplistic and relied on texture "layer-cake-ing". And the tiled roofs just looked a bit out of place for the Egyptian theme.

    You executed both the coaster station and the queue entrance structure very well however. This is what egyptian theming should look like - blocky and imposing with well placed trims and columns. And the Montu head sculpture was brilliant. I was a fan of your big custom trees too.

    Coaster layout is solid, nothing groundbreaking but it flowed well and was built to a good scale. I don't know how close it is to the real thing but nor do I care.

    Would've been a 65% for me. Nice but not your best NCSO work.