Park / The Patriot

  • 14-April 07
Park_4914 The Patriot

8 Comments

  • eman%s's Photo
    United States eman Offline
    So unfortunately this one did not make Design on account of being too small and not extravagant enough.

    The Patriot is a wooden coaster inspired by the late Harry Traver's wooden masterpieces such as The Cycloneat Crystal Beach. With a compact, twisted layout andintense elements throughout, The Patriot is sure to thrill just as the Traver coasters of old did. The ride is built in a classicaly themed area with a wooden station and classic old-school tudor architecture abound. The Patriot also posseses an excellent location, built next to a somewhat inland section of the Atlantic Ocean complete with a scenic pier and lighthouse.

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    Edited by eman, 14 April 2007 - 04:10 PM.

    posted 19 years ago
  • Steve%s's Photo
    United States Steve Offline
    SO awesome. I can see why it didn't nab the Design page, but don't let it get to you; this is something you should be proud of.
    posted 19 years ago
  • JDP%s's Photo
    United States JDP Offline
    I cant download it. The zip file opens but nothings in it...
    -JDP
    posted 19 years ago
  • Tom_Dj%s's Photo
    Netherlands Tom_Dj Offline
    Wow that looks really good :)
    posted 19 years ago
  • JDP%s's Photo
    United States JDP Offline
    got it now. brb to comment.
    -JDP
    posted 19 years ago
  • Ling%s's Photo
    United States Ling Offline
    ^31 hours later...

    Anyway, it looks great, nice cyclone you have going on (great for following the other Traver designs) with the coaster, and the red white and blue looks nice with the rest of the archy. Good job.
    posted 19 years ago
  • eman%s's Photo
    United States eman Offline
    Thanks for the comments.

    Anyone else wanna give me some feedback/criticism etc. Id really appreciate some more input. :)
    posted 19 years ago
  • geewhzz%s's Photo
    United States geewhzz Offline
    Probably should have been a design.
    posted 19 years ago
  • eyeamthu1%s's Photo
    United Kingdom eyeamthu1 Offline
    I really liked it overall. The layout was pretty much spot on - I loved the swooping overbank turns and the trick track into the brake run. Very good stats too, and the ride had perfect pacing. Buildings and foliage were nice, I like the pier. I liked the queue-line entrance, and the red/white/blue colour scheme worked really well.

    Just a couple of minor things I personally would have changed. Instead of that dark red you used on the coaster's colour scheme, I would have used the slightly lighter, toned down red you've used on the building rooves. I didn't really like the queue-line - I would've just stuck to proper paths, since you didn't really make the queueline go 1/4 tile. On the coaster itself, the layout was pretty much perfect, though I'm not too sure about the little bend straight after the lift hill -- it just seems wrong. Maybe a dip into it or something. I may have also added 2 trains to it, but that's not a biggie. I think you'll find with all of my gripes though, it's my personal preference... there wasn't anything majorly 'wrong' with the design - overall it's really good, you should be proud of it.
    posted 19 years ago