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13 Comments

  • Comment System%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Comment System Offline
    comment below
    posted 8 years ago
  • Lagom%s's Photo
    Sweden Lagom Offline

    Glad you made that building less squary. Looks much better, I think it's a very pleasant screen!

    posted 8 years ago
  • Scoop%s's Photo
    United States Scoop Offline
    It is pleasant but it's not as good as previous work I'll try and figure some better criticism after work.
    posted 8 years ago
  • G Force%s's Photo
    United States G Force Offline

    So much grey!

     

    Perhaps change the wooden deco fencing from grey to brown to give the park a bit warmer feel?  Its nice but just kind of feels a bit inconsistent in atmosphere.

     

    Also, perhaps add a fence to the path next to the water?  Seems just a bit too open.

    posted 8 years ago
  • Coasterbill%s's Photo
    United States Coasterbill Offline

    I really like this.

     

    My only complaint is probably the foliage, I feel like there are way too many tree types in that top left section... maybe it's just me though.

    posted 8 years ago
  • FredD%s's Photo
    Belgium FredD Offline

    Best work we've seen from you. Love it! Archy is great and overall very atmospheric. Not a surprise knowing where you got your inspiration from ;)  

     

    85%

    posted 8 years ago
  • Julow%s's Photo
    France Julow Offline

    Looks so beautiful and refreshing. I want to be here. I agree it's the best thing I've seen from you but I'm also kinda new here so don't pay attention lol. 

    posted 8 years ago
  • Jappy%s's Photo
    Belgium Jappy Offline


    Looks so beautiful and refreshing. I want to be here. I agree it's the best thing I've seen from you but I'm also kinda new here so don't pay attention lol. 

     

    That must be the strangest compliment I ever got :p 

    posted 8 years ago
  • RWE%s's Photo
    Germany RWE Offline

    Cool screen, you nailed the atmosphere overhere!

    posted 8 years ago
  • YoloSweggLord%s's Photo
    United States YoloSweggLord Offline
    I like how the lack of fence actually works here, since water forms a natural boundary. The large building could use with larger diagonals to make it appear more octagonal, but I guess it's fine as it is. If only you can get rid of those 8th-of-a-tile diagonals beneath them-maybe there's a custom object for that?
    posted 8 years ago
  • mintliqueur%s's Photo
    Sweden mintliqueur Fan Offline

    This I think could be the new "best screen yet" of this park. I really dig it, you've nailed the atmosphere. Just maybe one tree type too much right behind that meandering path in the pond... 

    posted 8 years ago
  • bigshootergill%s's Photo
    Canada bigshootergill Offline

    Nice work Jappy, this park will be exciting to see!

    posted 8 years ago
  • Stoksy%s's Photo
    Australia Stoksy Offline

    Woops, thought I'd commented on this. It's fantastic, yeah the amount of grey is kind of a problem but that's more because the right-most building has a grey roof as well rather than the amount of grey on the actual 'on water' structures.

     

    Would love to see more rockwork by the water edges.

    posted 8 years ago
  • Sulakke%s's Photo
    Netherlands Sulakke Offline

    Looks great! Make sure to place stones instead of sand inside the pagoda.

    posted 8 years ago

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