Screenshot / Crumbly Woods - Crazy Critters

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • kenos%s's Photo

    thats sweet i like it very mutch

  • chorkiel%s's Photo

    Loving this interpretation! The chess area is a lot easier on the eyes than the one in the game. Also a nice blend of the original scenery and custom pieces.

     

    Think it could be cleaner in some spots. For example the track near the pumpkin patch doesn't line up with the rail and looks freakishly small as a result. Whereas the track top right is a bit broad. The rail also doesn't enter the tunnels everywhere. 

  • windflower%s's Photo

    This is my favorite ride design from original game. glad to see this refine

  • Faas%s's Photo
    While I love your take on this scenario, I am not a fan of this screen to be honest.

    What I dislike the most is the ride track. The way you did it, the track is sometimes smaller than the cars (like in the center of the screen), and in other places three times as wide (right side of the screen). I would just use ride track or only a rail instead of this border.

    The landscaping also looks a bit unfinished, for example around the tunnel where the ride goes under the train (why put an s-bend there in general?). Another example is the top right of the screen where it just looks like random bushes and hedges and a tree.

    The theming also looks a bit haphazard. If I were you I would just focus on a few standout scenes inspired by the original and work those out more.
  • ottersalad%s's Photo

    I agree with Chorkiel and Faas - it appears that the track is not an even width around the circuit. Also boosting the theming a bit could be worth considering. Give the park a slightly higher theming budget 

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