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I start a 50x50 park... there will be 1 big coaster and the rest will be like i want it to be >_<

Here are 2 screens!


this is the island where the enterence is...


some little waterfall (this is one of the manny that will follow!!!

N-joY

-PBJ :pbj:

It's actually very nice IMO. It has a good atmosphere. Work on your foliage. The dark coloured juniper trees look really out of place. You might want to also try some more details in your architecture. You've got a few but you need more IMO.
But well done. Good start and you've improved.

yeah the screens are nice,though the're a few things that can be better like:the folaige, some of your folaige is really outplaced.and i don't really care for the building in the middle,it's a bit to blocky.

though you are improved,just work a bit on your archy in that 1st screen.

keep it up!

^ long time no see >_<

but tnkx...

hmm, well done, but i dont like the landscaping and the planting.
The building are okay.
The waterfall is beautiful, too.
But work at the things i said.

Jay_ho

Loving the buildings but the landscaping looks a bit bare, too random and needs more textures on the ground. I love how you've used the plants around the island though. The waterfall is ok it just suffers the same problems as the first screen. Besides that, it looks alright.

Work on your foliage and bush placement, make every bush and tree matter, don't just slap some down.

In the second screen, there's a dirt arch in the waterfall. There would be no water coming from it, it looks strange.

It's nice though.

Can people show bigger screens sometimes? It's kind of boring to see small screens with maybe one or two buildings in it, and another one with just a waterfall. It's kind of hard to draw an opinion.. dontchathink. Looks good though, I guess. Work on your landscaping.

I'm not to fond of the screens.'

It's too busy for my taste, they're like a trillion different in objects for landscaping and foliage in one screen.

tnkx all for posting!

but some feedback >_<

@ jon: i will see what i can do with the tree´s!

@ Rage:

[QUOTE]too random and needs more textures on the ground[QUOTE]

this is the weakest point of me in RCT... but i will work on it!

@ spiderman: i never plan something, not in my life nor RCT >_<

@ Turtle: you are damn right.. will fix it!

@Jacko Shanty: if i show a bigger screen of a 50x50 park it will mean the park is ready for downloading! if know what i mean

@Roberto Roboparks: i love bizzy parks, i´m a very bizzy person that doesn´t take drug to be bizzy my parks refelx the person i´m....

For some xtra info! the house has a balcony

Wow. Everything is very asian. I'm guessing that's what you're going for, so you hit the theme on the spot. Next time don't show a pic with the gridlines showing however. Nice choice of ground, I had no idea it went so well with the asian theme.

just a little update!

it´s a retaurant what can i say more about it?



N-JoY and tell me...

-PBJ

WoW! O_o

Awesome work. Loving the colors. My only complaint is the red corner pole towards the bottom looks un-supported.

Just too many different objects in the first screen to make it look interesting. It looks like you just randomly placed a bunch of stuff and put no actual effort into it. Everything in that section needs to have a purpose, you can't just go around adding stuff to fill up space.

@ Jkay: Tnkx!

@ gir: I´m Planning to redo that whole island for the first post... the last posted update will be chanced

I don't like the newest screen. I just don't think that pagoda piece blends well even though it is an Asian theme, maybe it's just the colors, whatever. Your style is interesting though, so keep at it.

a little something

first attraction is done!



N-JoY

What is the attraction?...I can barely see the queue line, let alone the actual attraction.

Architecturally, this is nice. The roof colors are cool and the buildings well formed, although I think that all the Japanese roofs get quite repetitive; I believe it wouldnt hurt to throw some other roof types in there. I also have to agree with what gir said earlier about the "fillers"; it makes for a un-attractive junk-yard type look surrounding the beautiful buildings. I would look for more consistancy there. But still, youre doing well with theme, keep it up!

i dont like the diffrent colored roofs. look at rivers of babylon he pulled the roofs off perfectley.