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HI...
Long time ago i started a new park...
U could see some screens @ rct-fiesta...months ago.

So...the park is 90 m² and its built without WW or TT...
The park has got 3 Areas...

First area:

The restaurant called "Colonial"


The Twister "Twisting Empire"(lol)


Here a cutout of the Rollercoaster "Terminator"



Second Area:

A Rafting and a Slide-attraction



Third Area:

Food Stalls:






Enjoy it...I hope its not too bad....

Sry 4 my bad english.


Jay-Ho

its....ok....just change the name of twisting empire...sounds terrible... and that coaster "Terminator"....it looks good, but the name just doesnt fit the theme...i know you dont know english very well, but please try to pick new names. and on the last two screens, add a fence along the edges of the path, it will make it much better. also, the third screen, take away those circle windows on the sign, it doesnt looks right. but you're off to a great start. keep it up!..._-.:°aDReNaLiNe°:.-_

Thx....I forgot the fence

I'll make a fence there and ill change some names...but have u got ideas, how i could rename the rides?

#1, #2, #3 - Wonderful, but why are there so many litter bins/benches and no lamp posts on the paths? I wouldn't fill every spot with something on the path. Anyway, the architecture is extremely pleasant in these screens, as is the atmosphere. Best of the bunch.

#4 - Marvelous rapids ride. The colors are a little dull. I don't like the "X" roofs. I think "V" roofs would look better. Whats with the random piece of support in the water there?

#5, #6 - A little dull. Tree selection is iffy. I would brighten the flower beds up; add litter bins, benches, lamps..etc...

But definitely the best screens I've seen from you. Keep up the good work my German friend...

Your architecture reminds me a little of BchillerR's in the first couple of screens. I like the pink flowers. The rapids screen is quite nice, as is the wooden coaster screens. I would definitly reconsider the colours of the wooden coaster though.

-X-

This reminds me of some of my newer stuff (and probaly better), but more so, like X250 said, BchillerR. Very neat and organized, which is the way I like parks to be. I'd prefer a style like this over work by some of the more popular people here...but anyways, I like it all, just ditch the cacti.

i like it specially the water brake into the waterfall even tohught the rest of that screen is kinda lifeless. screen number fours awsome i really like the mountain archway thing. keep at it looks good.

I'm not too keen on how that water-splash is elevated. You can see, where the track enters the feature, how part of it has no supports under it, making it seem as if the water's "floating".

I disagree. I think that's the best woodie watersplash I've seen. I love the waterfall idea, and how it all goes so well together. I like your architecture. It's cute. You really like using two colors for each different theme; I like that actually, it doesn't get boring because there's different sections with different color patterns. I'm really loving the peach-brown section. Awesome. Good work, sir!

Reminds me of how i used to build parks in RCT,oh the good old days.Just try not to be so repetative with your buildings and path side scenery.Example - eds work

First area: the first two screens look really good, great atmosphere, but there's just something about that 3rd screen that turns me off.

Second area: I hate river rapids that are plain like this. The track is just ugly and big.

Third area: Again, there's just something about those two screens that I do not really like, and particulary the way the coaster goes over the path.

In the third screen:
The Track looks out of place. Try having it come from underground And go thru the Water and go back underground.
Just a thought...

Ckeck the finished Park!

http://www.rct-world...rct2/latest.php
Load first "Zusatz FAP Mixed Trip"
then "FAP Mixed Trip"

If u dont know how to load these parks, klick only on the big Name.
=)

Thats my first park...
I hope U lik it a bit...? =/ =)

Jay-ho

mmhhh...
I think u dont know how to load...
Here the direct link:
http://www.rctd.ft6......ixed Trip.zip

bin beeindruckt, dass du den park fertiggebaut hast. hätte ich dir nicht zugetraut.
ein typischer beginner-park, aber das ist nicht wichtig. wichtig ist jetzt eher, dass du weiterbaust. neues projekt in sicht?

Jo, klar...
Eine Copro mitm Freund und einen 200m² solo....
Den werd ich zwar eh nicht schaffen, aber bis jetzt gefällt er mir sau gut und ich hab spass dran...
Vielleicht wird ja doch was draus.
Mfg jay

good luck.

Any comments else, or dont u like it soooo much?

ive never seen that particular idea used on a wood splash before. very creative. your structures are nice too