(Archive) Place-To-Release-Your-Parks Land / Espiritu Malo

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I started making this as a random coaster but then liked it and was going to submit it for design. However, as always I no longer like the layout and dont want to finish it, so ill just carry on slowly working on my solo instead

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Not bad at all.

I liked the layout, although i don;t quite get the theme.

I liked:

The archy was superb

As stated, great layout.

Queue line was really creative, made use of landscaping and positioning of certain elements.

*My list of positives would have been much bigger if it was finished.


I disliked:

The end brake run could have been better with an extra piece of track before the brakes.

The interlocking corkscrews would look better with a gap of 1 tile between them.

It's unfinished

No transfer tracks at all

It didn't need to be duel stations.

The eixt path would have been better if it went into a shop or something connecting to the main path rather then dissapearing into the ground again.


Please don't that review to heart too much becuase i'm only nitpicking at the realistic points. Overall it was great for what it was.....but could have been so much more!

Honestly, Richie. You can't finish a design? That was pretty much done anyway?

I loved the layout. Didn't really see what was wrong with it, apart from the afore mentioned dueling corkscrews, and a slightly weak ending.

Richie, i am seriously going to kill you.

This design was going in the right direction, it was looking fab. Why did you quit?

o ill just carry on slowly working on my solo instead

If you can finish your solo, i will reconsider killing you.

-X-

It's really hard to comment on something so unfinished. The coaster wasn't that bad. It had a strong layout and okay supports apart from the rather depressing colors.

I like the logo.

Edited by Xenon, 01 May 2006 - 02:25 PM.

Ya know Richie, unfinished stuff like this does not increase your chances of being drafted. I'm really dissapointed in you young man.

Although, you would make a nice coaster builder.....hmmmm

I'll try to download this for a closer look in the next couple days.

I thought the layout and colors were beautiful. The coasters that is. I dont think that the buildings colors would match as a whole. The waterfalls were great too. You really shouldve finished this.