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OKe i was bored and started to build something.... hope you all like it...







PS. i know that it's not quite ready... but i wanne give it a try here...

-Lennard - PBJ

Edited by PBJ, 07 August 2006 - 02:16 PM.

Nice architecture...
That's a good start; the building looks pretty good, although the windows look kinda repetitive, but it looks good anyway. I also like the path layout and fencing.
I just have a doubt...what's with the water that is 1 level higher than the land?...since this is unfinished, I suppose you still didn't work on that. Otherwise, I suggest putting some walls around that water area, for making it looks like the walls are impeding the water to flood everything...that would make it look more interesting IMO.
Anyway, you're making a good job. Keep going.

Edited by RCFanB&M, 07 August 2006 - 02:31 PM.

I really like this so far, so very nice details in the architecture. The foliage really gives this a nice sense of atmosphere as well. Good work, PBJ

Looks slopy, but i guess because its not finished.
-JDP

Looks very nice. Makes me want to start a solo project it rct2.

Scenary is looking ok, although the coaster look a little flat and dull at the moment

@ RCFanB&M: The water is the last thing that will happen i think... i wanne made several of this kind of landscaping at the water side. glad you like it by the way!


@ inVersed: Thank You.


@ JDP: but how do you think about it.....

@ RCTCA: I'd say: Take you cd-rom and play it


@ Leonardofury: The coaster is dull. correct. but this is not a coaster. okey you see coaster track i agree. but it's more a ride trhoug some rune's.

everyone thanks for the comments!

The architecture looks very good.
It's a very nice atmosphere in the park.
There is only one thing, I don't like. I think the roof of the house in the second and last screen looks a little bit strange.
This grey footpath and the brown fence look unfitting.

Face

it looks pretty good
-JDP

This area/theming intrigues me. I'd love to see where this goes. This is one of the few parks lately that made me look at the screens longer than 3 seconds. Seriously, finish this.

It's a great start, loads of little detail in there! Can't wait to see a screen when it's a little further along.

JDP do you just reply to threads for the hell of it? Sloppy or looking good, which is it?

It looks good, but it's just that its unfinished so it makes it slopy imo.
-JDP

It looks very decent to me, but I'm having the feeling I'm missing out on something. I'm not certain what to think of it as I don't see a story or theme in the stuff. Can you actually explain what you are trying to build. Would be easier to judge that way.

^ I think I get that feeling, too, but in this case it draws me in so that I look more closely at everything, which is unlike most others that are missing something - they just tend to make me frustrated or turned off altogether.

Looks pretty good. The use of landblocks is nice and I like the detailed archy.

@ faceman: I will see what i can do with the roof... you are right, the roof don't fit well. i don't hve a clue what i can do about it... will see what i can do.

@ Rhynos [1]: Thank you this will be finished. the only thing is when? =P

@ Todd Lee: Thank You for liking it. there will be a little update (i think also the last one) befor i will release it.

@ JDP: Oke it's clear now....

@ Tyandor: [Dutch] Ik begrijp wat je bedoelt met het missen van "iets". Ik denk dat het komt omdat ik niet klaar ben met wat je nu ziet. Er komen veel meer hout accenten in en rond om de gebouwen. ook zal er een costumride komen naast het grote gebouw. voor de rest is het nog ff wat aan pappen met wat ik voor de rest zal doen. hopelijk zal het eind resultaat een completere look hebben.

Over het feit dat je niet weet wat ik probeer uittebeelden. kan opzich wel inkomen. Ik heb een mix proberen te maken tussen de Fantasie wereld die de band Rhapsody (das een film-score metal band uit italie, die hoofdzakelijk allemaal verhalen vertellen via de albums die ze maken. deze spelen zich af in een wereld alla In De Ban Van De Ring). Naast die wereld probeer ik ook een flinke scheut middel-eeuwen er in te verwerken.

[English-summery]: I said: that i'm trying to make a medieval world with a mix of fantasy. The fantasy world is inspiration of the world that the Metalband Rhapsody makes for me.

@ Rhynos [2]: see feedback to Tyandor.

@ Ole: Thank You

I think someone previous used the word 'Sloppy' - I think that is a fairly good summary.

It has some excellent qualities. But it's sloppy. I guess with time that'll work itself out, though.

Looks pretty similar to one of Egg's works which is a good thing because Egg is a very talented player, and it looks like you are too.

Just finish a screenshots worth of work and your work will look ace.