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  • Gwazi%s's Photo
    Although a little inspired by parks such as IoE, this screen shows talent and I love it. Keep going.
  • Lloyd%s's Photo
    That particular screen looks a little too busy for me, but some of the stuff you have shown is wonderfull. I think you have the right idea, but that screen, makes my brain hurt.
  • J K%s's Photo
    Really nice stuff there. I love all the screens so far. I like the watch tower to the top of the screen. Great work, hope to see more from you soon.

    JK
  • Leighx%s's Photo
    Something doesn't quite work with that screen i think its the coaster colours and the supports. The purple and gold could be changed round abit ?
    Although the foliage is nice. The supports might look good brown? as for the track i think it needs some red on it?

    Anyways looks like your progressing well.
  • Gwazi%s's Photo
    ^ I think if he adds red, though, it would look TOO much like Cutlass in IoE. Maybe make the main color gold and the secondary a dark purple? Like, switch the colors around? I'm not sure how to fix them, but Leighx is right, the coaster colors do look a little off now that I focus on them.
  • Carl%s's Photo
    Lots of detail there, and I love that! :D The coaster colors contrast perfectly with the archy colors IMO too
  • JDP%s's Photo
    hot damn that looks good. idk why, but it reminds me of some of artist's stuff.
    -JDP
  • Turtle%s's Photo
    I think the 2x2 is getting on my nerves a bit.
  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo
    i honestly don't see enough to make an issue of it

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