(Archive) Place-To-Release-Your-Parks Land / Vendetta

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Here's my Design [font="Arial Narrow"]"Vendetta" [font="Times New Roman"].
I sent it in for an NE Design, but it failed.
Cork told me [/font][/font][/font][font="Times New Roman"][font="Arial Narrow"][font="Times New Roman"]very exactly[/font][/font][/font][font="Times New Roman"][font="Arial Narrow"][font="Times New Roman"] why it failed, so there's no need to point the negative things out ^^
You can confine yourselves to tell me what's good ^^
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Nah, just a joke. Please tell me what isn't good so I can do it better the next time...
Please read the "vendetta.txt" first.
It tells you the story behind the design.
Oh and just copy the music file into the well known "Data" folder
Here's the downloadlink:
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http://www.megauploa.../de/?d=VBNF26AK

Here's a screen of the "area's entrance":


Bye, MiFuNe
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Your 1/4 tile bush selection looks too random. You have tropical, desert, and temperate climate plants all mixed together.

[font="Times New Roman"]Okay, I'll pay attention to the bush selection the next time.
Thanks ekimmel!
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I am actually quite imprssed there man! The 1/4 tile bushes are strange, but i'm liking most of what i see. I'm definately checking it out, unlucky not to get design, it's hard unless you're J K.

Archy was pretty good, but the landscaping was mediocre, the foliage was pretty poor (Bad foliage combinations and bad placement/incorporation), and TBH the layout was pretty poor. This definitely showed some potential, but IMO it is definitely not design worthy, though with better foliage and a more thought out layout it could have been a contender for sure.

Im sorry but i thought the layout was awful. I thought you had the right idea but i felt there were too many hills and the last one was dumb. It killed the whole ride with that chain left. But i just thought the layout was boring and the park itself was just okay. Nice try.
-JDP

Yes, I definitely see your points...
Could you please give me some advice how to develop my work's quality, too? That'd be nice

well im not the best with arch or foliage, but my special is coaster design(supports not included).So thats basicly what i had to say.
-JDP

Nm, I spoke of "you" in the plural ^^
Thank's for the advice with the coaster, though!