Music Forum / A couple of mine...

Made with power tabs, meaning no drums or vocals. Not that I have lyrics for them (yet) anyway. Because the converter is apparently retarded they start rather suddenly and the end of each is kinda awkward. Sorry about that, nothing I can really do...

http://rapidshare.co...Songs1.zip.html

Please give feedback, thanks.

Ride6

Track 1:

Loved it once it got going. The into was making me a bit apprehensive, but once the parts 'came together' it sounded superb. I love the lead work over what i'm guessing was the chorus? Really worked quite nicely.

Track 2:

Not as good as track one, i couldn't get into as much. Still some very nice work there though. Loved the breakdown at 1:24, (comes back at 2:30-something, might even be a chorus?... that just added a different side to it, broke it up quite a bit too.

Track 3:

Ah, now we have a foot-tapper, Groovy! Well done here, i thought this was catchy and easy to listen to.

Although i must say that this isn't the usual stuff i would make or listen to, i thought it was pretty well executed.

Favourite: Track 1

Track 1 is definently the most complete. And you guessed correctly on which part is the chorus for that one. The breakdown (the "change" that actually breaks the mess up a little) in track 2 follows the chorus both times, though I suppose the 2nd on (at 2:35ish) could be an outro-chorus. Frankly that song, because of it's more hypnotic and atmospheric nature, works so much better when actually played; but it needs a lot of work: there's no bass and I'm considering adding some rhythmic piano as well. Track 3 is basically exactly how I want it. Out of the three it was written the most quickly (yet ironically is the longest song of the three). I came up with all of it (except the guitar solo) in one particularly inspired sitting.

Edit: Just a silly observation but I find it interesting that you like track 1 best when it's the only one of the three in 4/4 time (the other two are in 3/4).

Ride6