(Archive) Place-To-Release-Your-Parks Land / My Unfinished Work
- 24-February 07
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z3r0-G Offline
I have a .zip folder with 3 of my better unfinished parks. I meant to finish each of them, but I lost intrest in the game and stopped playing for a while, again, and never ended up meeting my goal. Please let me know what you think of them. Sorry, no screens at this time. I've exported all objects in each of the three files.
The download can be found here... http://www.absolutep...s_by_z3r0-G.zip
The download is about 6.5mb. Please take a look at each of the three and let me know what you think. The oldest of the three is Roanoke River, while the newest of the three is Avenger. Feel free to finish any of the parks if you'd like. I don't mind other people releasing them. Also feel free to flame me for whatever reason, although some constructive critacism would be much more helpful.Edited by z3r0-G, 24 February 2007 - 11:12 AM.
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z3r0-G Offline
^None at the moment, sorry. I'll post some when I get a chance.
@ OLE: Thanks for the move. Sorry, I guess I wasn't thinking and put it in the wrong place. -
5dave Offline
Avenger
Roanoke River Theme Park
Unnamed
I didn't quite liked your designs (strange layouts - unbanked turns and stuff like that)
Also I didn't like the supports at some places.
Roanoke was the best of the three. I liked the flyer and the Corkscrew - although it had more a B&M layout, but it wasn't bad...
"MFG"Edited by 5dave, 25 February 2007 - 05:11 AM.
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Turtle Offline
Then why don't you help him?
I agree with Posix, but the rest of the stuff didn't really catch my eye. -
zodiac Offline
Sorry but this is the only way i can put it. You need help on coaster designing...
-JDP
Lemme add some clarification... On the unnamed one: big hill then unbanked turn after the loop: not good. Drop into barrel roll: big no no. I know there are others but I forgot what they were...
Avenger: No no on the huuuge drop then huuuge hill before loop, and then a huge almost overbanked turn hill after that and a huge MCBR after only one inversion: no. BIG no.
I haven't gotten a chance to look at the other one yet but I will later... -
JDP Offline
^Thanks, lol..
I figure if he is not going to finish three projects, then why give him advice. Sorry, its just how I feel. Oh well.Then why don't you help him?
I agree with Posix, but the rest of the stuff didn't really catch my eye.
-JDP -
Gwazi Offline
Avenger could have used a little work. Same with the Unnamed Design. Roanoke was alright.
The archy in all three was pretty good, though. -
Ling Offline
the coasters are quite honestly horrible
but the archy isn't half bad. Keep trying with the coasters. -
RCFanB&M Offline
I like the station of the orange invert...actually, the archy is nice, the structures are well done and I don't really have any complaints with the colors.
I don't know which is your goal, I mean, are you going for a realistic feel or a fantasy one? If you want to make realistic layouts, you should check some NE designs, or go to www.rcdb.com heh...if you want to make something more fantasy-ish...well, make sure the pacing is good, at least.
Anyway, hope to see some more work from you soon. -
RCTNW Offline
Loved the station for the Avenger. But like others have stated, the rest didn't really doing anything for me. Mostly because they were in deed unfinished.
Geep working at it though.
James - rctnw
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