(Archive) Advertising District / Project Crimson

This is a park I've been working on for a while, and I'm finally getting some good progress. I've got some decent work on two different areas, and a few others are beginning to take shape. Anyway, here's the screen from the pirate area.

Hm, I like the Wreck and the idea of the rafting going trough it!

Otherwise, the rest is...ok - you know, not amazing but not bad at all.

That ship is fucking awesome.

Very nice start.

Welcome to NE

That ship is fucking awesome.

That ship is fucking awesome.

I love that ship that is fucking awesome.

I love that ship that is fucking awesome.

actually, that ship is pretty cool.

also the theming sround the drop is nice, but those big waterfalls on the right are a little overbearing.

I like the ship, you made a good work with it, I like the sunken effect of it.

I don't really see many flaws here, I think that you created a very pleasant atmosphere, and you also made a good job with landscaping and foliage, although if I were you, I'd add some yellow flowers...that'd add a more vivacious feel to the area. You're pulling the theme off very well, and hope you keep going like that.

Welcome to NE (hope you enjoy it), and hope to see more of this soon. Keep it up

Well, since I thought my post would be the least helpful:

I like the use of land height, though I'd be more impressed if it weren't on the edge of the map. The foliage is nice, and the colour choices are good, if not a bit safe. I agree that you need some colour to jump at you, and yellow would definatly work. I also really like the path interaction, like the little lookout with the water jets. I'd like to see some bigger buildings out of you, though.

Oh, and the ship is fucking awesome.

That ship sucks!



-JDP

Thanks for the comments everyone. I'm glad you all like the shipwreck.

As far as everything else, I'll consider adding another color to the foliage, and you will definitely see some larger buildings here soon.

Also, I've finished the coaster in the area, but it still needs theming.

u have one post, yet you've made two :?

You're right.... that's strange.

that ship is fucking awesome.


a bit that bothers me, though, is the lack of benches and lights and other path things like that.

u have one post, yet you've made two :?

The first post in threads don't count as posts, I'm pretty sure.

That ship is fucking awesome.

That said however, the landscaping is a bit lacking. If you can improve your landscaping and keep up scenery like that ship this could be great.

I like the placement of the 1/4 tile walkway, though I wish there were a more rickety looking version seeing as that would work better for the theming.

I personally like that little walkway above the waterfall. It looks like a great photo op.

And ship is more than fucking awesome! It's insane!!

Edited by Xin, 08 May 2007 - 06:43 PM.