(Archive) Advertising District / It hasn't got a name

Hello,

I'm Schittie. I come from Germany , thats why I don't speak english well!

I'm new at NE and want to present my first project, but it hasn't got a name.^^ Maybe you know me from
RCT-World.com.

So, let us take a look on my pictures.





I hope you will love it.

Maybe you can give me a nice feedback.


Cheers Schittie

Edited by Schittie, 03 October 2008 - 04:14 PM.

Wow. Amazing work here pal! Although I think the foliage could be better on the left side of the second pic.

i agree, the foliage isn't very good, but that chapel is fucking gorgeous. the colors wouldn't be my first choice, but it works.

thats some pretty good shit you got there.

It's good, but needs refinement- you're missing pieces in some places, like the black fence on top of the chapel, and the foliage is bad.

buildings are stunning.

Thank you for writting something in this topic, but
I've got two questions.

1.Could it be a design?
2.What's wrong with the foliage?

Cheers Schittie

Edited by Schittie, 04 October 2008 - 03:33 AM.

put bushes under the trees

Nice screens however in my opinion foliage and landscaping are often what make or break good work.Try and look at these from a peeps eye view and avoid over crowding.
Im not to keen on the amount of colours on the building either

Ok I will put some bushes under the trees.
So, here is a new picture of my project:



I hope you will like it.

Cheers Schittie

I like it, but i'm not sure the metal roof goes with the plain ones.

It looks alright, but I think it's a little undetailed. There's not much to hold my interest.

The building on the second picture isn't detailed like the building on the first picture...

What do you have invisible? You can see the sillouette from it.

track pieces are invisible (short cut '3')

Schittie, your problem is the foliage. You need to add some kind of plants. It doesn't matter what, but add some foliage, please.

I dont need the short cut, Im just curious as to why you would make something invisible for a screenshot..... If you dont want to show it, maybe it shouldnt be there in the first place.

or maybe it's blocking the buildings and they want you to see them properly...

Yeah, that monorail would probably ruin the picture. But I'm not too keen on what the one at the top is.

Your architecture is brilliant and unique, but be careful it doesn't become monotonous if all the buildings are the same style.