(Archive) Advertising District / Six Flags Washington

Hi everyone! this is my current park Six Flags Washington, a duo with djbrcace1234! Most screens you might have saw at TPR, but oh well.


Musik Express. (Need someone to help extend the train.. A little WIP by the subway..)


A little shot of the western area..


Goliath's station..

Enjoy!

I feel like the landscape would be more manicured around the big attractions. Especially Goliath, the park's biggest (I'm assuming). The fountain seems out of place in a Western desert town deal, I think it'd fit better in the first area shown. I'm also unsure of the railroad's weed problem. Is this town deserted? If so, then why do the buildings look fresh and new? If it's not, then why are there huge weeds and grasses growing through well-traveled railroad tracks? You also need to fully connect the tracks.

For the Musik Express, the best way to extend the train is to shoestring it. I can help with that if you want. As for the western area, those train tracks look too fresh for what appears to be an abandoned look. I think mine train track would help it fit in much better. The last screen is great too except for the use of wooden coaster as the catwalks. That glitch in the upper right just goes to show that this is not a good way to build catwalks. I'd also suggest using something else for the station roof instead. There are enough variations of Kumba's roof objects that work great for that curved metal Six Flags coaster roof you're going for here. Lastly, why are the loose item shelves on the queue side of the station? That would make things quite chaotic in the station with guests going back into a full station to get their belongings. Overall, very impressive and I'll be following this park for sure.

If it's not, then why are there huge weeds and grasses growing through well-traveled railroad tracks? You also need to fully connect the tracks.

Its suppose to be abandoned track.. Its not men't to be connected. D: I'll probably use the mine track like RamSam suggested..

For the Musik Express, the best way to extend the train is to shoestring it. I can help with that if you want. As for the western area, those train tracks look too fresh for what appears to be an abandoned look. I think mine train track would help it fit in much better. The last screen is great too except for the use of wooden coaster as the catwalks. That glitch in the upper right just goes to show that this is not a good way to build catwalks. I'd also suggest using something else for the station roof instead. There are enough variations of Kumba's roof objects that work great for that curved metal Six Flags coaster roof you're going for here. Lastly, why are the loose item shelves on the queue side of the station? That would make things quite chaotic in the station with guests going back into a full station to get their belongings. Overall, very impressive and I'll be following this park for sure.

Thanks RamSam for the suggestions. I will send the park your way so you can help. All those suggestions are great and I will do them.

Im not really a fan of my station, everything else seem tight though

I don't like it to be honest, it looks dead, and I think not even peeps could help it being less stale, the execution isn't high enough to carry it and the landscape is boring to be honest, it's aal too flat and simple, you're playing on safe mode, or at least that's what it looks to me sorry.

I think you should try to find a way to make everything look more flowing and especially more elaborate as it's all WAAAAY too simple in terms of design and such, the shapes are pretty boring and you're not hiding this by clever use of functional details and atmopsheric foliage, theming and such...

I think this is your breakthrough and it looks absolutely fantastic. Keep going the way you are.

Well I figured it was meant to be abandoned. Sam just summed it up with the "too fresh" comment.

I have to echo BelgianGuy's thoughts here. It all is too simple, and it just lacks interest. This is a prime example of realism that I personally find distasteful, though others seem to enjoy it.

^i cant agree more with what you and bg have said.

the landscaping is the real issue here. though in the second screen it seems ok. id say be more adventurous with the land and water tool. build rivers,lakes,wateralls,cliffs and mountains etc. Your a good parkmaker when it comes to everything but landscaping. work on that is all im saying. rides look so much better with interaction. weather it be path interaction, water, caves, cliffs or other rides. so to conclude my thoughts im really not liking the flatness, but everything els is good. oh and one last thing. the foilage on the mini railway track is a good idea, but it doesnt work.

I like this very much.

First two are nice, but I'm not a fan of the Goliath station. And lower the wooden track on the brake run a unit with MOM so that it isn't drowning out the B&M track!

Thanks guys! I'll try to fix my foliage and the Goliath catwalk..
Here is another screen of the lakeside area:

too much path for your scale. tighten it up a bit and add benches, trash cans and lamp post and youll be good
-JDP

^^agree , bring on some light, electricitie poles and it will be good

I like it, good use of space. Check the fence above the land sided with the black wood, you have 2 fence peices to zero clearance in

That is really nice. Really really nice.

It looks great but boring as well, this place needs to fall away in the more awesome things you probably have in your park. It's not really worth advertising imo.

How is it boring? It's got beautiul foliage, quaint architecture and brilliant path layout.

Yes, I'm not saying it's not great work. It's just that nothing's happening, everything looks so lifeless and empty, which could be a good thing, but seeing the coaster it looks like it's meant to be the/a center of multiple bigger rides.

I always love little sitting areas like this, and yours is a prime example why, Coupon. I'm in love with those game stalls, too, perfect!