Fiesta! / Super F

Although it is supposed to be a little timeline park for the Dutch forums, here's my most recent work:










The story is about a man who get's his parents farm and eventually turns it into a themepark, but this is only the beginning.

Electric Fields on steroids. Could be good. I like the farmhouse though.

Always liked those timeline parks!
Would like to see it here with a proper presentation!

"MFG"

Timeline parks need to be around here more often, when the AD opens back up I really hope you keep up with this.

I will see what I can do. It's a lot of work to translate the story into English. But I will see...

New Fiesta, new screen:



Very WIP. It's mostly landscaping practicing for me, because I'm bad at that.

There's not much to comment on...
The landscaping needs more diversity, it's very much the same all around and that's not natural. Height variations could do wonders.

Some variation in the landscape would do wonders for that screen. Looks like you've had fun with the mountain tool.

I think you've got far too many hills on the coaster. For a loop, I'd barely put on in there. It's not awful bad though, supports look alright. Keep going.

Lol, didn't use the mountain tool at all . But I will see what I can do, as I said it is moslty practicing for me so the tipps are really helpfull.

It's too regular and smooth to be believable, especially how it follows the coaster layout. Don't be afraid of irregularities and having vertical land visible.