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  • Scoop%s's Photo
    So I have decided to move this park to a new topic instead of the dump place.
    Enjoy!

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  • Corkscrewy%s's Photo
    Huge improvement on that second screen. Nice little area ya got there.

    -Josh
  • 111112oo%s's Photo
    I can't really comment on this for it's VERY unfinished, but I do see some good potential in there.
  • MEGAMINDY%s's Photo
    The sparetrain-transfer in the second screen is wrong. It just makes no sense this way.
    The rest looks good though.
  • posix%s's Photo
    Too little done to comment.
  • Scoop%s's Photo
    So here is another update for the park enjoy.


    BTW the only reason I don't have foilage as far as trees is because when i zero clearances and reset them it makes the trees glitchy. so I wait until after I am done with everything.

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  • 111112oo%s's Photo
    The buildings and decorations you have there are just too bland, doesn't catch my attention at all.
    Experiment with objects for detailing.

    EDIT: And

    Too little done to comment.

  • Super G%s's Photo
    You have to use 8-cars 1.302 for zero-clearencing. Every other version gives glitches yeah.
  • MorganFan%s's Photo

    The buildings and decorations you have there are just too bland, doesn't catch my attention at all.
    Experiment with objects for detailing.

    EDIT: And


    omg this guy is helping you so much take his advice lololol
  • Xtreme97%s's Photo
    The screens look alright but I think there are too many grey walls. Try using tan to brighten up the buildings and think carefully when using certain details. You're improving though.
  • 111112oo%s's Photo

    omg this guy is helping you so much take his advice lololol

    best jokeu evar hahahah
  • Scoop%s's Photo
    Hey all here are some new screens and updates to my new hopefull medling project.
    -I finished the station to the intamin mega.
    -Some Facades have been built for the midway/main entrance.
    -Some gardens have been placed.
    -and i finished a station that may or may not stay for the river rapids ride.

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  • Super G%s's Photo
    You're definately growing! Just try not to make all your buildings so blocky, they're mostly just a squares. But I see you become better!
  • Scoop%s's Photo
    thanks I keep that in mind but I'm just not sure how NOT to make it blocky
  • disneylandian192%s's Photo
    Those chimneys are huuuge!
  • Arjan v l%s's Photo

    thanks I keep that in mind but I'm just not sure how NOT to make it blocky


    You can use more quarter tile diagonal blocks to shape the building ,porches ,balconies etc. to make the shape more interesting.
  • Super G%s's Photo
    Try to make different forms for different floors. Make sticking out windows, a balconny or change the measures of the building per floor.
  • Disney Imagineer%s's Photo
    A few things I recommend that might help it look more realistic:

    1. Use Toon's custom supports for the coasters and variate which ones you use so the supports don't just go straight up and down.
    2. Add lots of foliage.
    3. Use different ground textures.
    4. As for the buildings, study different types of architecture you see in your daily life, and do some research to get inspired (which is what I have to do). Buildings don't come naturally to me either so that's what I do. I have a few cool buildings around my hometown on cool streets that inspire my work.
    5. Try not to make your coaster stations so closed in. Maybe do some archways.
    6. Not sure if I like the walls on the station for the orange Intamin.
    7. Lastly I would take off the wooden beams on the yellow tower, or space them out a bit more so the ride vehicle can squeeze through. Looks kinda close to me.

    Looks like you've got a good start, just needs some polishing.

    Love your avatar, BTW. I love Sheldon! Best avatar I've seen yet.
  • Faas%s's Photo
    In my opinion, your main issue is the fact that you don't make it look like an amusement park. I see no themes or no signs that it is somewhere you go for fun, except the fact that it has rides. Give your buildings a clearer purpose and brighten that shit up.

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