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Universal's Aneheim Island

This is my first park EVER so please don't criticize me like I was an Official parkmaker or something.... Though I'd like to hear some suggestions, complaints, blah blah blah... This park is a 225 x 225'er and I hope this park is well enough to pleae you guys! *Note: If you notice there are no jagged rocks or ANY trees, I am adding those in the end....
Screens....
EDIT: I am already like 36% done with the park. These photos are from when I was 20 % done. I will be adding final touches when I am like 90 % done. I will add more recent photos soon!

Upadate! (2)
I have added two screens that are more recent from the other ones.... These are of Marvel's Superhero Island... The roller coaster is called DareDevil......Screens!

Update! (3)
I have added nine screens! they are all of The Lost Continent (not done), SuperHero Island (not done), and the updates Raven told me to do. (And I have to say they look nice!). By the way.... I WILL be able to make Jurassic Park now! I just found them in the scenery thing with the question mark thingy. Well, I'll have a great time in Vegas!

Update! (4)
It looks like I won't be leaving till' noon, so I posted some screens of White Dragon Mountain. Enjoy!

Update! (5)
Yes I am back! I forgot the story lol so I will try to make sure to make up a new one. Pics came up of the Toon lagoon, and Oasis Resort Hotel. Yup! This park looks boring NOW, BUT IT WILL GROW!!! MWAHAHAHAHA! MWAHAHAHA! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! MWAHAH.... *cough* *hack* *cough* ........ ........ Click!

Edited by MantisFan794, 14 April 2003 - 05:23 PM.

Its a private album...

Does it work now?

Yeah it works now. The park looks ok, nothing special. I think you could improve it by making your architecture to one kind of style because you are using lots of different walls and colours, which doesn’t help the feel to the park at all. The coaster looks ok but again you need to choose some certain colours for the station. But it has potential.

Two more screens added!Click here.... (These are more recent photos of Marvel's Superhero Island)

Hello.


The park looks solid...
However...

Screen 1
- The stairs on the right hand side are a tad excessive.

Screen 2
- The station to the coaster looks good, but the red has to go. It is WAY out of place. Maybe if you leave those buildings the same color as the station (tanish-like), they will look better and a little more even.

Screen 3
- Ummm. Your coaster is too extreme. The random Topspin is really out of place and not needed there.

Screen 4
- "Shrubbery" is not needed on the building to the left.


Thank You.


Raven-SDI
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Hello.


The park looks solid...
However...

Screen 1
- The stairs on the right hand side are a tad excessive.

Screen 2
- The station to the coaster looks good, but the red has to go. It is WAY out of place. Maybe if you leave those buildings the same color as the station (tanish-like), they will look better and a little more even.

Screen 3
- Ummm. Your coaster is too extreme. The random Topspin is really out of place and not needed there.

Screen 4
- "Shrubbery" is not needed on the building to the left.


Thank You.


Raven-SDI
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I did everything on your list except for the roller coaster rating thing.... I can't slow it down or anything... besides, I am NOT good at modifying rollercoasters.... I changed the colors of the station, but the screens are not up yet.... You can expect an update or two tomorrow! Thanks for your advice, comments, and suggestions...... (By the way Raven, I oved the topspin to the Superhero Island part of the park)

EDIT : I will be on vacation, in Las Vegas, so I may not update tomorrow... Though I will be getting Ideas from Vegas so keep checking back! I am like 60% done with Marvel's Superhero Island, and 45% done with the Lost Continent. It won't be long, (at least until I get back) until I get Toon Lagoon, and Oasis Island (The Mummy) started. I won't do Jurassic Park (cause' I don't have the Dino scenery), but I am 40% sure I will make the Studio Tour. When I get back, I will make sure to keep you updated. And please keep posting, I don't want to find this topic in the 7th page . I will have a short story and ALOT of new pics when I get back. Until then, have a several amount of days without me!

EDIT II : See next post....

Edited by MantisFan794, 10 April 2003 - 10:08 PM.

Update!
It looks like I won't be leaving till' noon, so I posted some screens of White Dragon Mountain. Enjoy! Screens!

Edited by MantisFan794, 11 April 2003 - 10:09 AM.

Update!

Yes I am back! I forgot the story lol so I will try to make sure to make up a new one. Pics came up of the Toon lagoon, and Oasis Resort Hotel. Yup! This park looks boring NOW, BUT IT WILL GROW!!! MWAHAHAHAHA! MWAHAHAHA! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! MWAHAH.... *cough* *hack* *cough* ........ ........ Click!