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Here are crappy shots from my park. No more screens after this, except 1 or 2. Maybe. I dunno.

Just comment. Storyline will be in the read-me.

Channelwood

Come visit the Channelwood Age and travel through the trees, along the catwalks, over the water, and on the bridges...

http://www.rcthq.com...hannelwood1.gif
http://www.rcthq.com...hannelwood2.gif

Piondela

The Piondela Age is where the peoples of this ancient land worked. In it is the coaster, Piondela Metalworks. In the vast hills and mountains, people melted the metal they found to construct homes, shelters, and to create safe havens from the evil force...

http://www.rcthq.com...a/piondela1.gif
http://www.rcthq.com...a/piondela2.gif

As usual, comments appriciated, good and bad.

hmmm...
i still say the "tree" needs more bushes... LOTS more bushes...

Screen 1: Looks good, landscaping is nice, but like Blitz said, the tree needs more bushes.

Screen 2: A tad bare, but I'm really liking the landscaping

Screen 3: From what is there in the screen, it's okay, maybe once that area is complete I can say more.

Screen 4: AH! The layout of the coaster from what I can see looks fine, but I'd suggest adding way more trees to that coaster (unless you aren't finished with the theming yet).

No trees are planned for Piondela. Just those 2 bushes. But I may if I decide it is still too bare when I am done. I've had people say leave it without bushes at all, but I decided (with help of Ed), to just use bushes.

Piondela needs more jagged lanscaping next to the paths and a fence along the paths as well. Other than that it looks amazing and I can tell you Spidey the coaster is great. The hacked trees are wonderfull as well. This is tons better than Exile and should hopefully earn you alot of respect that you don't seem to be getting.

Everything looks very nice, I really like the hacked tree. The quad towers' structure is very cool and the coaster looks to be really nice aswell, keep up the good work!

Just for clarification, the quad towers have no outstanding weird name.

They are the power generators of Piondela.

Channelwood

Come visit the Channelwood Age and travel through the trees, along the catwalks, over the water, and on the bridges...

I love how you got that name from Myst.

Oh, and about the pics. They rock. So hard. But, the question is... Why Do They Rock So Hard?

It r0x0rz mah b0x0rz.

Fo' sheezy.

Looks awesome. I especially like the grey coaster. But I have a question, are you planning on filling the area with anything at all, or just leaving it bare?

I like channelwood a lot. I won't comment on the ride, coz you havent explained it, but it is a fascinating way to mix theming with rides. Nicely done. Keep me updated!!

It all reminds me very much of Eriwindale Forest, especially the first pic. Speaking of the first pic, I love it. It's great when people make big trees out of track. It's starting to be done more and more, which is a good thing. The secound pic is kinda boring. It doesn't really show anything about the area. The launch towers look great. I like all the twisted metal inbetween them. The coaster in the last pic looks pretty good, but the landscaping is blah. There are no plants, something that I don't like. Overall it looks good. I can't wait for it's realese.

*200th post*,
Hevydevy

I'm realling liking those last pics.

That area is best.
Nice archy.
It is a bit bare tho, you should make a patch of trees somewhere maybe.
The jungle trees are nice too.

good job, keep it going.

Explination time.

The Piondela Age could also be called the Metalworks Age, so think of it that way. They mine metal there. Therefore, vegetation is a bit hard to really put in there and make it seem like a mining (not really, but sorta) community.

Channelwood is basically an attempt of mine to try and reproduce some elements of the age from Myst. It turned out pretty good, although, I've found countless things I would have loved to do to make it better, but the restrictions of the hack I used kinda stops me from doing that.

The Yugoshi (mining town) Age wasn't very popular, so I may work on that section again at the end, even though it is done.

The final age hasn't been started yet, but I made quite a few plans on paper, and it will hopefully be one of the best areas I've ever done.

Thanks for all your comments, and I would love to have some more.

Channelwood is fuckin boring!!!! Put something cool in there, the tree doesn't do it for me.

The other two screens look INCREDIBLE. I love the style that you're incorporating..the colors are awesome, and the archy is too.


Woo, go freak.

Channelwood is fuckin boring!!!! Put something cool in there, the tree doesn't do it for me.

You don't do it for me, and I don't make fun of you...

Lol. How did I make fun of you?

I meant....I like the tree, but it needs something more too.

What?! You used gray... I thought you hated gray. Anyways, looks good, but I would prefer some more vegetation on the first two screens.

im telling you, more bushes are needed, its needs more "bulk" to be tree-like.

im telling you, more bushes are needed, its needs more "bulk" to be tree-like.

I agree. Right now it looks like there are just bushes scattered everywhere.