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Sorry OZONE, some things were meant to be copied. :/

I've never really made a park before, nor release one. I just want to see if I'm on the right track. (And I'm aware that it's really, really cluttered.) And yes I messed up the post title.

Looks very nice i like that bridge gives out a very cool jungle effect. well dont keep going cos im luving it so far.

Reminds me alot of one of Morts old parks, Pine Springs.

Whether that is a good or bad thing, though, is debatable.

My DreamWorks park will be released first. Muwahahah.


I would say that you should:
1) Make your buildings a little bigger
2) Make your paths a bit wider - cluttered can be a good thing, but there should be some place to walk that isn't covered by a bush in my opinion.
3) Calm down your colors a bit - some of the colors look out of place.

For your first park I think you are doing quite well though, I didn't figure out anything on the beast trainer for a long time, looks like you have the build through going for you already.

Thanks for all the comments and suggestions guys. I especially wanted to hear what OZONE had to say. I will keep all of this stuff in mind.

I am working on a dreamworks park.. too...

Oh well...Dreamworks is the next Disney I guess..

Edit:

OZONE, is this the size building you are looking for?



(This is the Shrek Store by the way..)

This next screenshot is of a Carousel- enclosed in the nice air-conditioned tent. (Because now that I think of it, it would get very hot in there..)



Thats obviously not the final, its just an idea in progress.

WAY, to random imo.....looks to messy. I'd get rid of the plants on rooves, and just not be as random....and i'm not fond of the green path/green path/on green grass....

WAY, to random imo.....looks to messy.  I'd get rid of the plants on rooves, and just not be as random....and i'm not fond of the green path/green path/on green grass....

what hasn't been messy and random lately

i'm not fond of the green path/green path/on green grass....

Er....that might diminish the point of the theme a bit- Shrek.

I've fixed the carousel now so that it doesn't look so ugly..

Heres the fixed carousel: (Yes, its under there - you can see the base turning or its visible when you choose to see-through the rides.)

This is partially a bump but oh well..

Compared to the last screen...is it too cluttered, should I have left it the same?



I'm really stuck.

Reminds me alot of one of Morts old parks, Pine Springs.

Exactly my thought....

Anyway, I dont really like the green section too much, looks weird.

Amazing!

Reminds me alot of one of Morts old parks, Pine Springs. Exactly my thought....

Anyway, I dont really like the green section too much, looks weird.

sfgadv02: Its supposed to look strange/different I guess, its themed to the movie Shrek.

Also, what things make it like Pine Springs. (Yes, I've seen the park) I guess I'm not seeing it, must be really subtle.

dont like it to much green but i supose its ok?...?

I've worked a little on this... I started a new smaller map. It will either go along-side the large map or be stand-alone. This is what I have so far, its a yacht for the DreamWorks Yacht Club. It is sitting right next to the entrance. (It is not done yet either- I still have lots of work to do on it)



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