(Archive) Advertising District / park with trees and colour

here is a screen


waits

a park with what what??

park with colour cant c any??

it hasn't got a name so i just called it that, sorry for the confusion

could you comment on the actual screen please, much appreciated.

ok then wel yeah it looks good the station but u could maybe put a few bulidngs around the actual coaster. and the railings dont look do good.

Yeah...the railings are overused. Switch it up a little and use fencing that is shorter height-wise.

Well get rid off those vines on the wall they dont fit well and yes a little less on the railings , also that flame pole on the left is way too high so change that and mabye some more archy and colour.

The station has too many wall textures and is held up by sticks. The torches don't look good and the tree selection sucks. And it overall looks sloppy.

thanks for being so uplififting

Your welcome.

Its not too bad. Some of the colours clash a little and the landscaping is on the right track. Just work on your colours and archimetecture and it could be good.

Turned

OK I've had to dig this topic up from about the 100th page but I am still going on with it

new screens altho may be incomplete







Feed Me

erm....? looks ok but some of the buldinga are to plain?. but seeing as its incomplete not to bad.

could you comment on the actual screen please, much appreciated.

i would if they worked...

could you comment on the actual screen please, much appreciated.

i would if they worked...

There is like 3 screens there that work.

Anyways i think it is too crowded and needs more colour if you ask me everything seems to be thatch roofs and wooden walls add some more colours in there because it looks like the same old stuff over and over again.

~nemesis chris~

great name: user posted image, isn't it? Truely fabulous.

Yeah you've a problem - none of the screens actually work, and the first is just some iownjoo.com logo... get it fixed! :::

They do work you piece of shit

well, they work for me anyway

the first one doesn't work cos the iownjoo account fucked up so don't shit your pants worriying about that

-foggy-

You account has had too many hits, so it is not displaying them for us anymore.
Find a new host.

BTW I could link an image here off my hard drive, and I could see it, but you couldn't. Therefore, never assume that since you can see it, we can too. Piece of shit.

S'cool, but I think that for once the jagged rocks are a bit unnecessary, especially right next to the path like that. I like the square of little flame things over that path cover in the last screen.

Nice work.