(Archive) Advertising District / Unique!
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12-October 03
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theforceofg2003 Offline
here is a giant themed track project that has the concept of being 'unique'
atm, the only unique things are the triple corkscrew (on most B&Ms there are only 2)
and the photo in the cobra roll
it has a sort of millenium force layout and it has 7 inversion
here is the first image, as promised, triple corkscrew
the second image is of the station which i think is very atmospheric
all comments accepted
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natelox Offline
The word and meaning of "Unique" mean alot to me, so I must reply here. I really can't see anything unique about this. What is three interlocking corkscrews? It's not normal, but it doesn't make it unique. I really don't see how that would stand out against any other roller coaster made. Unique is something that will stand out, make a statment, and be truely on its own. -
Leighx Offline
dont like the buliding?!?!make something in the buliding cause u can see the floor colour in there.
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artist Offline
i aggre there is nothing unique about 3 interlocking corkscrews and that big building is ugly i say you try smaller buildings because this one is blocky mabye add some balconies. -
theforceofg2003 Offline
what the hell do you need balconies for? it's not a house. Some person is not going to just go in there and start living in there, some people
and most coasters have 2 interlocking corkscrews and 3 is kinda unique
but yeh different if you say so -
VegasCoaster Offline
How can it be unique if the layout is based off MF? The photo in the cobra roll has been done before in RCT, and I'm sure many have done triple interlocking loops, just not many are in released parks. -
artist Offline
Because the building looks blocky just something to make it less square.what the hell do you need balconies for? it's not a house. Some person is not going to just go in there and start living in there, some people
and most coasters have 2 interlocking corkscrews and 3 is kinda unique
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deanosrs Offline
I have some constructive criticism. At this point I would like to point out that you won't last long around here unless you are willing to take advice... trust me, if you do you will get a lot better a lot quicker.
1. Don't comment on your own screens... it's kind of annoying.
2. You have a really strange tree selection for ice landscaping. Put in some snow covered trees and the norwegian spruce would look good in here.
3. The checkered path you used doesn't really fit in imo.
4. Try to put more detail into your buildings. One way of doing this is splitting them up into smaller sections so they're easier to deal with. More colour, balconies, windows, doors etc would help. And try to avoid the paper thin wall look. Also, I would say that buildings should either have glass or windows/doors, not both, unless it's done subtely.
5. Fire in an ice section?
Anyway, I hope those help. Btw, the coaster design looks promising... I wouldn't brand it as "unique" but it's certainly something different.
And don't ridicule people for making suggestions. They have taken the time to reply to your topic, the least you could do is treat them with respect. -
sircursealot Offline
hehe, roomie beat you to it. *shuts up*atm, the only unique things are the triple corkscrew (on most B&Ms there are only 2)
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Themeparkmaster Offline
Um... hundreds of people have beat Junya Boy to it.
Check most peoples scenarios. -
Prince Offline
Three isn't unique, if you want unique look at my first mega park "Amazing Anime and Mega Movies" I have 4, count them 4, interlocking corkscrews! Now that's unique...
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Jacko Shanty Offline
Sorry, not one unique thing about it! Putting three interlocking corkscrews does not secure it in the "unique" hall of fame. It's gonna take a lot more than that. I define unique as something completely out of the ordinary... no cliches, complete originality. I'd make the station more unique as well. Get rid of those ugly circular cartoony windows. Go crazy with it, experiment with new things, don't reference to other peoples work.
This is just constructive criticism, remember! No intentional harm. -
Blitz Offline
-kill the bright colored trees, and pick something more seasonal/climatized
-three fucking corkscrews... big whoop.
-the building is too simplistic, unaesthetic, and unskilled. Not to mention how little attention to detail is put into that thing, it looks like it was put together in 5 minutes.
-your color choices on just about everything are dull, passe, and unnoteworthy.
-a piece of advice: simplicity is not the same thing as subtlety. Minimalistic tendencies are the lack of materials in use, not the lack of thought going into it.
I'm only really being harsh because you seem to be in denial about the information people are giving you. You being disrespectful of their opinions does not speak highly of you, or your capacity to develop. -
theforceofg2003 Offline
You scrare me-kill the bright colored trees, and pick something more seasonal/climatized
-three fucking corkscrews... big whoop.
-the building is too simplistic, unaesthetic, and unskilled. Not to mention how little attention to detail is put into that thing, it looks like it was put together in 5 minutes.
-your color choices on just about everything are dull, passe, and unnoteworthy.
-a piece of advice: simplicity is not the same thing as subtlety. Minimalistic tendencies are the lack of materials in use, not the lack of thought going into it.
I'm only really being harsh because you seem to be in denial about the information people are giving you. You being disrespectful of their opinions does not speak highly of you, or your capacity to develop.
I'm aiming for reaslistic, that is why i refuse to put balconies in, i really think it's a no no
the tree selection is kind of annoying really, cos i don;t have the snow trees (when i made the workbench and the ride i didn;t know it was gonna be snow themed) and i like using the quartered trees for the land cos then i can fit more in so the ride wont get in the way as easy. So i'm a bit duped.
what colour schemes can you use for a snow theme??
and last of all, thanx for the constructive criticism
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Kumba Offline
I did tri locking corkscrews in Nirvana ( NE Runner Up) and mine had the best tri locking corkscrews......*runs away*
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sircursealot Offline
Yes, but Junya didn't have triple-triple interlockers.Um...Junya Boy beat roomie to it.
Check Dez-Morais.*Shuts up again*
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theforceofg2003 Offline
Yes, but Junya didn't have triple-triple interlockers.Um...Junya Boy beat roomie to it.
Check Dez-Morais.*Shuts up again*
*blows up*
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