(Archive) Advertising District / Las Regas

Hi,

I've taken in all your comments and come up with a new park with some new ideas.

Tell me if it's an improvement to last time...



Go to this link and compare it to my last efforts...

Gerudo Heights - My Last Theme Park (it's bad i know...)

So, is my new one an improvement?

Thanks, would appreciate all your comments.

Hahaha. I don't believe I didn't work that one out before. Should have seen it from the Travis fans thing... anyway, that's a lot better. Colour the land inside the buildings and ease up on the roofing a bit. Or something.

Single pathing is no good. AT LEAST two across and I would suggest three.

Also ease up on the roove, I agree.

Yeah what's with the identical IPs? And llamajuice or whatever!

It's kinda cool, and I think the single-wides are fine.

Yep i tried it out with double paths/triple and it looked pretty awful and empty. So, I tried it out with single again and added more buildings and now its fine.

What coaster does it need, a woodie or a twister?

Here's my take on the park so far:

- There DOES need to be 2-3 wide paths
- You can get a "less" empty feeling by having a flower/shurb/tree square between the path and buildings
- Use a wider variety of wall and roof textures
- Get rid of that hideous path, too busy looking
- You're trying to be too Mala-esque IMO, using the wooden cross-beams to build an entire building looks incredibly tacky
- Use different textures under the paths

... if I can think of more, I'll edit this post...

Loose the roof overhangs, they make the sides of the building look 3 feet high. I'd build a woodie in a Spanish area, seems like it might fit well, but you could build anything.

Everything seems to blend into everything else. Definitely change to wider paths, single paths really don't cut the cheese any more.

You might want to ease up on the benches and mabey color the land beneath the paths. Also, color the outer edge of the water fountain. The buildings seem to be cluttered, so i suggest you make wider paths, or smaller buildings.

Overall, it isn't my style, but it doesn't look awful either

Yikes, you're obsessed with those wooden cross beams! I'd remove some of them and use them minimally. Also, add some more windows and doors - it needs a ton more detail. Otherwise, it really has a lot of potential. Like Mick said, it blends very nicely.

Thanks for all your comments...

And no one mentioned how apalling the name for the park was! Thanks.

You need something else other than the spainish theme in there also all them wooden crosses look ugly so change them to walls.

the whole park will be spanish, as it is 50x50... so very small

Also, the wooden crosses will be destroyed, so don't post about them any more!!! Thanks.

GET RID OF THE WOODEN POLES! MY BUNNY WILL EAT YOU!


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It is pretty good, I like the way the buildings are connected. Just get rid of the poles, and change the path.

Screen Updates: sorry, not much of a change but let me know what you think.

so u mean ur just goin to use spanish theme and nothing else like brick walls or something??.

so u mean ur just goin to use spanish theme and nothing else like brick walls or something??.

thanks: willl include more brick walls, but are they really spanish? I'll change the screen in the near future, and see what it looks like. Should be ready in a few days

thanks: willl include more brick walls, but are they really spanish?

Yes.

Right, ok then...

More textured walls will be coming!!!

And a wooden roller coaster...