(Archive) Advertising District / Sonata Glade

This is my first park, to show here in nedesigns. It's called Sonata Glade. I know it sucks, but it's just beggining. Comment please.

Sonata Glade 1 Pic

most of it is blank, because I just started..so the blank spots will soon be filled. This is an 80x80 park.

not working.

Sorry here is a diff link, to the pic.

Sonata Glade Screen1

Honestly not much to go on and it is really blah.

The fountain needs work, don't put two lemonade stalls next to one another, and work on your archy. You should also not have the water the same height as the land. have the land slope into the water.

alright thanks.

The lemonade stands are fine, dont change them. The architecture is nice, it looks like a realistic classical park. The water should be a level lower, like he mentoned. Looks good, finish it!

thankyou I promise to make it better, I just started it like an hour ago. But I plan on working on it real hard.

I built more in that entrance area. Here are a few more screens. Keep in mind, I just started to build it, and there are alot of blank spots







Comments please.

good work making
but I don't like no full screen shot..

I find it sweet.
Don't quit this realistic style. I love it.
Maybe add some more trees to it? I think you only have two types in there. I'd try different ones as well.
Other than that I don't feel like there is anything wrong with it.
Keep it up.

I was working on a steel twister, but I frogot to put mechanical themeing for my scenario, hence I cannot make supports for the coaster. So I'm planning on making an adventure woodie, is that okay?

hey its up to you..

make the rides that you want to make. Don't let us decied for you.

Yes its alright

Still alot of blank spots. The park is under heavy construction, but here is a pic of some of the woodie and it's entrance. It's called El Rio Reel.

WOW!
Looks Gold coaster $.$ @.@

Good luck

.? dunno need a bit more detail???. and the woddie is to goldie colour.!?

gold? Is that bad? It's supposed to be like the coster of the sun.

I think the colour's fine, except that from what we've seen it kind of doesn't have anything to do with anything else. Granted you may plan to expand on the gold/sun theme, but I can't comment on that.

it's a different part, called the sun's edge. More screens later.

[font="Tahoma"]Here is the entrance of, "El Rio Reel". It's just a few changes, nothing big...I'm 50% done with this park, just now need to fill the blank spots, maybe add another coaster.



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