(Archive) Advertising District / Forgotten Continent

  • jon%s's Photo
    With Cedar Springs (my original park) postponed, I decided to start work on my new park, Forgotten Continent. I took in comments from when I posted Cedar Springs and applied them to this park. Now, IMO opinion my architecture has inproved a bit more. So enjoy your stay at the Forgotten Continent.

    First Pic

    Above is a shot of a ver unfinished Entrance Area which I only started this morning. The building in the middle is the Park Information building. In the lower corner, there is a small un-named gift shop. In the top corner is a 3d Cinema attraction (un-named.)

    I know it's not much but please comment on it. Also, say whether you think I should drop it or carry on.
    Thanx.
  • sloB%s's Photo
    It looks half decent but heres a couple things...

    --needs landscaping, as of now its all flat land. thats no good.
    --Add in some flowers next to the paths, maye those purple and pink ones, theyre always good for that theme
    --The tree selection is all wrong, IMO, you HAVE to get rid of those pine trees specifically.
    --You may be overusing the bone fences, but i guess it part of theme. Just be careful with those.

    Thats all I could think of, good start though
  • Panoramical%s's Photo
    looks great, carry on, fills the theme of Forgotten Continent...
    Like the brown paths in the cobbled paths helps to make it less mundane...
    Good tree selection also.
    Carry it on and it will look good!
  • deanosrs%s's Photo
    Change the name. Please...
    Your buildings need more detail I think. More "layers" on your buildings. I don't mean higher, just more things going on is needed imo. And most of the bone fencing needs to go. And try some bigger structures too.
  • jon%s's Photo
    Thanks for the replies

    sloB: I will put the flowers in. I can see why, I seems plan.
    deanosrs: I will put more detail in.

    I will also change the fencing.
  • sfgadv02%s's Photo
    Why does everyone put grass under the path?? ???
  • v1perz%s's Photo

    Now, IMO opinion...

    IMO means in my opinion, so you just said in my opinion opinion...

    Park, looks good, i agree with the slight overuse on bone fences. Solid job so far.
  • Turtleman%s's Photo

    Why does everyone put grass under the path?? ???

    Why does everyone not put grass underneath the path. I haven't seen grass under for a long time.. What is wrong with grass anyway?

    Turtleman 8)Murder is fun
  • California Coasters%s's Photo
    I really like this park, nice architechture, nice colors, nice use of scenery, goodjob! Just put some flowers in.... ;)
  • Metropole%s's Photo
    Firstly, it looks a little similar to Tula City IMO

    Secondly, lost some of the bone fences, not all though

    Thirdly, change the name because it sounds a bit like a rip off of Lost Continenet at Islands of Adventure, but doesn't have the same effect. New same along similar lines I think

    Apart from that, I think it looks very good.

    Metro B)

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