(Archive) Advertising District / San Anton' Reef

I think its okay for my 3rd try on a park.

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Comments Please

On the flyer, I would say to:

--get rid of the roofing over the lift hill, its strange.
--Stay away from just treeing most of it, thats boring
--I persoanlly think its really unrealitic to have those long stretches of straight track totally over the path. At least get rid of the straight track, and I would suggest putting next to the path, not directly over it.

it looks good but

don't overse that roof, i know it looks really good from my own experiences but it will end up looking quite st00pid when all you have got is one tyupe of roof. Fill the land a bit more, you have empty spaces of land that you could fill wth rocks and shrubs and foliage and stuff. The brown and pink look st00pid together, either add another colour or delete one of them, experiment a bit more. The mars land doesn't look very good especially with that blue and red coaster. The entrance look really good but it could do without the whole in thr roof where you can see inside, so fill that in with something. Other than that it is very admirable, just get your colours right and you will be fine

-fog-

You profane the name of a great city with your lackluster attempt at Mexican theming.

On the flyer, I would say to:

If the ride was a "flyer".....

Anyway, not bad for a start, but I dont like the treeing on the inverted. Maybe too much trees.

oh ya haha my bad.

Anyway what I said still applies

Pretty good, yet looks a little bland, add more buildings, cut down the tree amount. Overall, pretty nice park!



BTW- I am REALLY liking that enterance...

The transitions on the invert are horrible, keep it all banked on the drop and go into the banked turn, or not banked at all on the drop and then turn, don't change from bank-flat-bank at the bottom of the drop. The first drop looks weird, lose the straight track. Other than that the problems with the theming and rooving have already been stated.