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I screwed my DreamWorks park, I made it (really) ugly so I scratched it.

Not sure of the location, but its a Busch park...and its a look for them they've never tried before. I'm guessing I'll situate this on North Carolina's Outer Banks- but thats not official. This screen isn't even near completion, but I think its good enough to show...

Screenshot: Entrance and (uhh) Will Call
-> BTW, those pipes were originally supposed to fit into some sort of boat funnel theme but it looks good the way it is right now IMO.



Comments and Suggestions greatly appreciated.

IMO, this is too cluttered. The tracks especially, just make it seem to smooshed together.

I usually tend to build cluttered. Its the only way I know how. I never feel satisfaction when I have a bunch of open space. God help me. Any tips on what to delete or how to build more open?

Do those tracks glitch?
Spread things out a bit. Use more space. Less compact and cluttered.

its got alot of detail but as gir said to clsoe together!. and squahesd up!?

Lovely! Doesn't look like you've restored clearances, but when you do it'll look funkydory! I'm not sure about the grey walls/portcullises, but I can't think of an alternative so I guess there's no point in mentioning it.

Keep it up - I like so called 'cluttered' work (I call it detail and atmosphere) but hey.

hmmm... I like the effect of the path goin inside that ghost train window.
I think you could design a more appropriate front for that building, as the effect really screws with the solidity of the rest of it. erm... what im trying to say is: its a sore thumb. That may just be because of the clearance...