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It's incredibly large and dull. I'd put more detail into the buildings if I were you. They are far too spread out.

^Yes and I don't like the colors at all

Try and stay away from using all those dull colors.

Ud the blood red, aqua, yellow, orange, etc especially for accents.

thanks, ok, will brighten up the colours on the walls - get rid of the blacks. i think it needs a coaster jumping up and out of the buildings so i'll put one in... keep posting - i need all the feedback i can get.

I'm putting a flyer in, and by the way, this area is called the Lost City, based on an abandoned city. Some more screenshots to be added tommorrow morning.

This isn't based in Aspen, Colorado by any chance?


Because if so, it looks NOTHING like it...



The architecture is boring and not incredibly well colored either, it's dull, bland, and stale.

There is no atmosphere in it, either. You need try to create an atmosphere.

Oh, and what's with leaving the carousel out on the open, simply sticking out plainly like that?


>_<

I don't see your "lost city" theme here at all.

You do have to work on your atmosphere. Add some flowers and coose your textures, rooves and colors better(more fitting to the theme)

Its actually based on the Aspen Lake race track in Wave Race Blue Storm on Nintendo Gamecube... I left the atmosphere bland so it would look basically like a once commercialised and modernised city, that has been left, and now dirty and empty... hence the bland colours. Perhaps Lost City isn't the best name for it, it makes you think of something Aztec

Another view of the first screen:



The Merry-Go-Round has been removed, and a flying roller coaster added.

Well the colours make it look so boring and plus its a flyer and the objective of this coaster is to make the guests feel like there flying so you want the track low to the ground to give the sensation of near miss and flying. So try to make the track lower and some waterfalls and gauges for the train to swoop around would fit this area well.

Hope that helps..

~nemesis chris~

What colours would you suggest? What do you mean by guages? Ok i''ll put more water stuff and caverns and stuff for the coaster to go through.

I would suggest a turquise or light green something along those lines.

~nemesis chris~

right. i've got rid of the flyer now it's now a floorless. The area has been expanded loads more but i'm not putting up any more screenshots until the area is fully complete.

Modified screen...



Tell me if it's any better. (and it's not a floorless, it's a vertical drop.)

Wow, you used too many colors. Sorry, you can't throw a bunch of stuff together and call it a park, or a resort. Basically you need to stare at a color wheel for a long time. You also need supports on that coaster. Actually, it'd look best if you killed the roller coaster completely because it looks really bad. God- just kill the whole project now. Its really bad and anyone can do better than that. Especially since you've used like ten wall textures on one wall.

ok im shit at rct2! are there any tutorials or help that can er... help me?

No, just keep building and posting. Every time you post pictures, listen to the suggestions and insert what you like and what you don't like. Its all about trial and error.

Looking at the pro work always helps too

what pro parks would you suggest?

yeah slob is right take a look at some spotlights or mabye Kumba's parks he has some exellent colours and coasters in his parks or mabye fatha's bgss.

~nemesis chris~