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Freshly restarted here's a teaser of what I've soon so far.



Their will be more screens added later.

Updated 11/17/03

Is everyone trying to be John or Kraken?!? Jesus.

Be your own builder, young grasshoppa'.

it looks 2 random imo...try to stay more solid with your buildinds and using the same textures, and the 1x2 water and waterfall looks kinda weird...

its not terrible...but its not amazing

[font="tahoma"]I don't see what's so John or Kraken about this...anyways I think it's nice. I just don't like some of the fences/walls you used.[/font]

Wow, pretty good start. I have a few suggestions...

1.Get rid of those grey lines on the doors, they are pretty ugly, and don't match the rest of the park.

2.In fact, get rid of those other lines in tan tothe far right.

Not much to comment on, butreally good start, I will be following along yhour updates...

Good start,
Get rid of the yellow and make the circle window towers more detailed. Good start though.

Is everyone trying to be John or Kraken?!? Jesus.

Huh? How is this like John or Kraken..

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Anyway, its just really random, I think thats your problem. It sort of looks like you tried to make it detailed but ultimately failed. I have no idea why there is a castle fence/wall thing in between the paths...its weird.

Thorpedo How am I like both of them, I have a complete different style!

Steve41 Yes, I'm still expirimenting with my textures, so it'll probably look better when the building is done.

dragonfly Thank you for the good reply but I have to agree with steve41 , my textures don't look good but as I said before I'm still expierimenting.

mantisfan I agree I'd like to take away those grey lines.

Rctfan1556 I'll take out the yellow and make it some other color.

gir It isn't that random, their are just peices that don't look right. As your work , they are too cludered and make it look ugly.

Anyways thanks for the comments guys I'll try to improve of whatever I'm working on.

gir As your work , they are too cludered and make it look ugly.

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Divination, I invite you to enter the temple.

^LOL at brent0s...kinda weird, but hilarious

Is everyone trying to be John or Kraken?!? Jesus.

Be your own builder, young grasshoppa'.

Why don't you take your own advice and come up with your own criticism. That looks nothing like anything I've seen from John. Sometimes you're a real dumbass...

Is everyone trying to be John or Kraken?!? Jesus.

Be your own builder, young grasshoppa'.

Why don't you take your own advice and come up with your own criticism. That looks nothing like anything I've seen from John. Sometimes you're a real dumbass...

[font="tahoma"]lol...I have to agree with this [/font]

it looks good but the castle walls round the path there is to many of them. and some of the buldings look a little rushed.

Is everyone trying to be John or Kraken?!? Jesus.

Be your own builder, young grasshoppa'.

Nothing like either of there work.


Screen - Looks alrite but to many textures in the building and too many colours they grey doesnt really fit there either does that brick path makes it look ugly.

Hope that helps.

~nemesis chris~

Detailed, but I don't like the castle walls on the side of the path...
Also, add landscaping (or do you have to do that yet?)

SF

I added landscaping just didn't detail the landscaping with shrubs yet...

New and update screen, how does it look?

its not bad, but im just not to sure what it is? you may want to try some other things with the path to.

How are the boats on the top supposed to get out with no water behind them? Looks like you overuse the teal arches and flat rooves a bit, but other than that it doesn't look that bad.

It's not shit. Well, the second screen is.