Park / Peregrine

  • 23-February 13
Park_2642 Peregrine

5 Comments

  • Comment System%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Comment System Offline
    posted 11 years ago
  • Angroc%s's Photo
    Norway Angroc Offline
    Neat! Love the rocky landscape and how the coaster snakes around it. : )
    posted 11 years ago
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Netherlands Liampie Offline
    The park section of this map was generic and boring, but the coaster section shows you've got some balls. I really liked the landscaping.

    Looking forward to seeing more! :)



    And Angroc, good to see you around again too.
    posted 11 years ago
  • Ling%s's Photo
    United States Ling Offline
    I didn't like most of the landscaping. Most of it was too chaotic. It was more the kind of thing that you would blanket in trees in an old-school LL park. You should also have used the quarter-tile landscaping objects more on the main mountain. You only had them on two or three tiles. I loved most of the interaction between the foliage and landscaping on the left side of the map though. Maybe too much repetition of that one quarter-tile tree. The stations was a little strange as well. I guess it was just a little too simple.
    posted 11 years ago
  • inthemanual%s's Photo
    United States inthemanual Offline
    I definitely had room to use more quarter tile land objects, but I figured it wasn't a big enough difference in appearance to warrant the extra work. Maybe I should have just tried it anyways. The foliage ended up denser than i had originally planned, but I liked the look of it anyways, and I felt like it fit. I built and rebuilt the station like 7 times. The one I ended up with was a little weird, but I liked it so I kept it. I was expecting to score a little higher, but I can see why it didn't. Any criticism would be appreciated.
    posted 11 years ago
  • Arjan v l%s's Photo
    Netherlands Arjan v l Offline
    I think it's quite alright for a first release.

    For a better score next time, my advice would be...

    Foliage needs improvement, some variation in species and colors, it was very generic now.
    The coaster design wasn't bad, but not great either. I did however like the use of a transfer track, good job.
    Architecture wasn't really interesting.

    Like Liampie said, it's a bit boring.
    posted 11 years ago