the_bru

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Positives:

1) Foliage is top notch.

2) The shape of the upper building is outstandingly done.

3) Love the palette. Evocative and distinctive. 

4) The flow of the map is great with my eye being drawn to the right spots.

 

Critiques:

1) Rockwork is good, but could use a bit more diversity in the upper spots. I'm also not sure the electric fences work in the lower part.

2) The bobkart is fine, but I was hoping for a more interesting twist on the ride type.

 

It's a 70 from me.

Great work on this park. The stars are the coasters, which are picture perfect and stand out on the map. I also really like how you did Viking Voyage. A lot of the garden and farm details are also really fun to look at. 

I agree with Therty's notes on the parking lot and road. In general I think the pathing doesn't quite feel natural and could do with some more curvature. 

Regardless, this is a great build and deserves way more attention.

This is a wonderful and wildly creative park. The palette is perfect for what you were trying to accomplish. It's hard to imagine anyone criticizing it who has an appreciation for traditional Japanese art.

I don't have much to nitpick. Maybe the layout could have been slightly more elaborate or less square, but I think it all works in the context of the park. Well done.

I would join, this sounds fun.

+ The wonders really shine here, as do the roller coasters. My favorite thing though is actually the landscaping, which I think is perfectly done. My favorite area is probably the gardens of Babylon which I think has the most room to breathe. There are so many cool details, such as the midway games and the small sculptures. Your object usage is always so creative, and a personal favorite was the badminton rackets for handicapped signs.

- I think the map would have benefitted from more space. The first half in particular feels cramped. The back half feels a bit more roomy and I prefer it as a result. I also find some of the architecture boxy, though some of that is by design.

Summary: Incredible in scope with so many neat details, great job.