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TimmyTuner
Go to post #800123
Wow what a stacked round! These entries are all great, the quality throughout is really remarkable.
AJs Prairie Lightning
Wow aj this is freaking sweet, youre always bringing the heat in these contests. Definitely reminds me of your dkmp transportable coaster entry a bit, cool to see some parallels here. I gotta say having played some cso now, the stuff that you are able to put out in these contests on your own is astounding.
It’s a great looking park and I really dig the vibe here. Ride design slaps and I love the interaction moment with the log flume.
Purely for the prompt I would’ve liked some components, like the vertical drop and steam elements to be a bit more pronounced, but this doesn’t take away from the overall map for me. Really enjoyed this a lot, awesome work!
Modern Foundations
This is a very clean and solid park! A dive coaster is a good way to get the vertical drop prompt and I like the layout a lot. Pretty flowy and imposing in size, making it a standout in the park.
I like a lot of the macro decisions here, like the diagonal train and dive coaster crossing sections, as well as the more open water and field sections. It doesn’t go above and beyond in aspect to the prompts, but its all of a pretty high quality and overall a very enjoyable entry to view. Great work!
Movie Night at the Turn of the Century Club
Oh my god I love this. Super creative and artsy entry here. Presentation is really cool with the projectors, the visual effects and the washed out palette, really sells what you guys were going for here imo. Definitely a bit hard to vote on as its so unconventional. In terms of prompts, this is a unique twist on the time period in forms of a presentation, so that nails it pretty well. The steam elements are well represented too, only the vertical drop doesn’t stand out particularly much to me, but it is there. The quality is up there, but knowing whats possible with one angle shenanigans I think the 3 rd scene could’ve perhaps used another minute on the stove. The last one I adore though, with the miniature scale! Well done!
Steel Valley
Nice work lurker! I always like your railroad entries and this is no exception. You used it well to frame the park here. With the somewhat limited possibilities of LL, you still managed to get some really nice theming in to sell the time period decently well. Landscaping is lovely, although the park overall is a touch dense for my liking here and could’ve used a bit more room to breath in the center. The tasks have all been checkmarked here, but don’t stand out particularly in comparison to some of the other entries. Still, this is a very sweet entry that I enjoyed a lot. Always love a lurker entry, good job!
The Last Frost Fair
This map is amazing. Such a great vibe here, from the music to the visuals and the execution is top notch. I had a lot of fun reading up on this historic event to get some more nuance and I think the frost fair itself is done perfectly. That snow crunch is absurd and so much peep stuff really brings everything to life. The factory and town parts are done similiarly well and the quality throughout is just fantastic.
The coaster layout I love, however theres some coaster decisions that I don’t like fully. Im not a huge fan of the brown on brown color scheme and I think it’s a shame such a wonderful interaction moment is obscured inside that building. In the grand scheme of things this doesn’t take away much of my enjoyment of this wonderful map, truly one of the highlights of the round for me. Fantastic work!
Victoria Mine - Shaft 13
Geez im in love with this park. The macro is really standout to me here with the central train tracks on the diag and how the coaster flows around it so well, along with the backdrop of the mountain. Then the lift with the tilt drop is awesome and works perfectly with the theme of the round and the entry – almost mad I didn’t think of It haha. This map really nails the tasks given the best in my opinion along with being among the highest quality too. I probably would’ve done the tilt drop with a more elaborate shoestring, but that’s not even really a critique, what you have here works perfectly fine. What I find somewhat interesting is the use of some of the more recent prominent ncso/dkso building techniques – namely the large compound letter signs and the heavy use of rowing boats for the catwalk and some architecture. For me the catwalk works really well, but the curvy edge of the leftmost building looked a bit wonky to me, especially the Streamlined monorail vehicles there. That is among the only nitpicks that I can give, as this is probably my favorite entry of the bunch. Also a shoutout to the underground theming that’s only visible with cutaway view, an appreciated touch and bonus content to a map that definitely didn’t need it haha. Amazing entry and great work!
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TimmyTuner
Go to post #800047
I like it, good size and shape for the entrance. Red path is a nice touch also. Could think about breaking up the white walls a bit more with some detailis. Windows, hanging flowers or arches just for some ideas.
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TimmyTuner
Go to post #799993
Another awesome round of TTA! Only 3 maps this time, but the quality is incredibly high. Definitely made for a tough vote!
AJ:
Great looking park. That layering and interaction on the flume and the heartline twister is awesome. Great pathing and the shaddow effect is a really neat little touch! Music as always fire. Great work as always AJ, your tta run is so inspiring! Keep it up!
Jens and JK:
That sign though! Loving the atmosphere and jungle foliage. Supporting attractions are on point and the watercoaster is inspiring. Those boats are awesome too, that mix of track and cso works so well here! Huge fan, glad to see yall enter this contest.
Kumba and deano:
So much to explore in this one with with all the details, peep scenes and cutouts in the back. Truly feels like a little treasure hunt. Some great macro decision with the framing of those waterfalls and the landscaping! Love me a dense and busy map, this hits just right for me!
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TimmyTuner
Go to post #799939
cutie patootie lil invert there mr goblin, really nice
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TimmyTuner
Go to post #799938
Great work ballpit, really impressive speed build!