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MTC - What a wonderful idea and well executed.  Im honored to have been included in the park with these fine parkmakers.  When you were sharing some details on Discord, I had no idea how you were going to pull this off.    The area you chose for me was instantly recognizable.  It wasnt a just copy and paste, you took from that area and added your own touch to it.  I like the "improvements" you made and may just have to incorporate them during the HNWA expansion.

Looking around the map, I could recognize some of the areas from parks I have seen (Belle Isle and Magic Kingdom) but the others I will need to pull up those parks and take a look. Thanks for including the parks that provided the inspiration.

The only critique I have was not sure why the area between Belle Isle and Phoneix was empty?  Perhaps just an oversight?

In any case, this was a pleasure to explore, Im honored you included me in this version and I look forward to your next park.

Wow.  What a difference in quality between the 2 submissions.  Significant jump in quality and content.

The structures you have inside the park have some great detail work on the facade.  I love the ticket huts at the park entrance.  Nice touch
I would like to see a bit more variance in the shapes though as they all but right up to the path.  Add some planters in the front to help break it up a bit.

Sad the the ferris wheel was closed.  I fell it was a miss opportunity.

As others have stated, Im not understanding the snowy mountain so close to the beach.  Unless that is the tie into Denver, it just missed for me.  That said, I do like the rock work on the beach.

Overall, a huge step in the right direction and continue to build to refine your style.  There is potential there to get your first accolade.

I can tell you had fun building this as its nearly all coasters and rides.  I can also tell this is some of your early work as your other bark seem much more detailed.  That said, we all started somewhere and this does show you have potential in creating some nice parks as you find your style. 
 

That said, this is all rides and coasters.  There is more to a park than just that, think about shops, restaurants and other structures to helps support the story you are telling with your park.

Congrats on getting a park finished though.  That is not easily done.  

Congrats on your first accolade!  getting the first one of the toughest. 

I really liked the Enigma area the best as it clearly looks like you have spent the most time in that area.

I also like the monorail interaction in the park throughout the park.  Can never go wrong with a good monorail IMO.

You also did a good job of blending the lands together to minimize and harsh transitions.

That said, it dis not feel balanced to me in the quality / time spent in each land.  Some of the areas felt very rushed.  Finally, just because you can have 32 rafts does make it a good choice.  Nearly all of them are empty and you have about 7 of them empty in the station.  Trim it down to around 15 and space them out using the minimum wait time
 

Overall, congrats on the Bronze!  Keep looking at other parks on how you can fine tune your style and enjoy what you are doing..

Congrats on the design.    There is plenty to like with this.  The ride station from the front is really nice.  Love the openness of the station platform and the overall feel with the front side but the back side seems like it was a missed opportunity.  Very curvy and flowing on the front but the back is mostly flat.

Being a monorail fan, I was sad to see it soo tall and going over the top of the building.  You could have easily had it go over the path next to the coaster station.

I do like the path work and the queue interacting with the coaster is a big plus for me.  

Overall, solid design and congrats on finishing it.