Park / Six Feet Under

30-November 10

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posted 13 years ago
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Dotrobot Offline

This is improvement but still not good enough.

The foliage is just 2 types of trees. Add 2 or 3 more. And add shrubs and grass. Amount of shrubs and grass > amount of trees.

The buildings are too repetetive. All same colors, textures, details. Try to give each building its own idenity, while not making it a stand out eyesore in the park.

All these suggestions are easy to fix.

And try to make the park peepable next time. It really helps with the atmosphere of a park
posted 13 years ago
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Hex Offline

Alright, thanks for the advice. I'll use it next time and hopefully I will improve more.
posted 13 years ago
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Wicksteed Offline

This looked like it was made in 2003 or something.
The theme wasn't bad, it just got very repetetive.
Keep going, listen to what Dotrobot said, and you'll get there.
posted 13 years ago
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Xsquad67 Offline

Hey man, good job on the coaster but the scenery needs work, basicly what Dotrobot said, but good job anyway.
posted 13 years ago
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Hex Offline

Thanks, but what do you mean by good on the coaster. Like what was good. The layout, supports, colours, etc.?
posted 13 years ago
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Fizzix Offline

Looks abit repetitive and monotonous. Add some more color somewhere, and improve your foliage as Dotrobot said, and you'll get one of these.
posted 13 years ago
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GigaG Offline

Its OK, but add variation to the buildings. It looks good, but vary the theme a bit. Overall, this did deserve a bit higher score.
posted 13 years ago
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