Park / Montegue Manor

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  posted 5 years ago

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  Ling Offline

  Was this actually accepted for the contest? It violates two of the rules pretty flagrantly - there is no universe in which The Crypt could be classified as a family coaster, and you have two coasters while the rules explicitly require one and only one.

   

  The church by the train ride and the mansion itself are both really solid structures. The foliage is kind of a mess, way too many of that one hay field object, and in way too many different clashing colors. The map could really have done with more trees. The quarter-tile foliage actually makes your landscaping look messier than it is. Sentinel Keep is a massive step up from this, visually, in my opinion.

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  Watercooler Offline

  Hey Ling, thanks for the feedback. This was one of my first real attempts at really anything more than a simple park. I was still really unfamiliar with a lot of custom scenery and was still working to improve my foliage. I do agree that it definitely could of been executed better. And yes, Sentinel Keep is a large improvement, I've been taking a lot to heart on taking advice. 
  
  I just decided to upload some of my recent stuff just out of order from when I made them.

   

  As for breaking some of the rules this was discussed with the challenge manager and admins on RC&F before submitting. the invisible broom coaster they actually wouldn't accept as a coaster since it was invisible so I had to throw The Crypt in last minute, it was definitely not a family coaster but a lot of those entries broke that same rule so they allowed it in and just took points away during voting if I remember correctly. 

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  Cocoa Offline

  this is cool! the weird objects work in your favor here IMO to make a cool and unique atmosphere. the foliage is vibey and the mansion/architecture are done well. the layout is just atrocious though- I have no idea what you were going for there . the train in the hay is awesome though

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  I liked the animated objects you used, although I'm not a horror fan, but I like parks that.
  I really enjoyed the terror trees and I liked the foliage in general.
  The building I liked the most was the ghost train and the animated objects it used on it, it was top.
  The Hay Hide was good walking through all that foliagen seeming dry by the sun, the colors of the foliage is good, and the architecture of the church with the cemetery next to it I liked quite a lot.
  The paths combined with the park theme.
  Good work

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  Quirky and fun.  Great "alt textures" park using some unconventional objects.  The coaster was a bit of a letdown compared to the atmospheric village attractions.

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