Park / Hutt River Theme Park

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  posted 2 years ago

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  ottersalad Offline

  Nice timing with posting the screenshots and the park getting released. I think this is definitely a step up from your last park we saw. Coasters were nice.. and I think the maze/kiddie coaster area of the map was very well composed. The yellow tunnel added a nice pop of color in a park that was dominated by greens and browns and reds. I know I commented on your last park about adding more gardens.. I think this park suffered from the same lack of some manicured gardens and foliage. What trees/foliage there was felt a bit random and sparse.

   

  The car ride and the go karts combo was pretty neat and effective. I think the only thing I would change there is to make the go kart queue and start/finish area a bit more defined and detailed.

   

  I think the ideas here though are quite good. Pleasant and simple garden park. Reminds me of a little park I submitted when I first joined NE. Look forward to more from ya.

  posted 2 years ago

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  Croustibapt Offline

  Yeah, in retrospect I would really need to follow a foliage tutorial or something, I've always been really bad at it for years.

   

  Thank you for that nice comment though, I'm glad you appreciated this map.

  posted 2 years ago

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  AJ- Offline

  Cute little release yo,

   

  This is very pleasant and fun! The tunnel on the kidde coaster is a huge highlight for me. The maze and glass green house are nice. The RMC is pretty good layout, its a bit slow for me but its still sick.

   

  This is nice and I cant wait to see the next one! 

  posted 2 years ago

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  Lurker Offline

  Some nice stuff on this map, my favorites are the maze, especially that little rest area in the middle and how it was done, and the kiddie coaster. Really the whole side over there was pretty nicely arranged to me. 

  posted 2 years ago

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  Jene Offline

  Congrats on a nice release. I think the coasters are the strongest parts of this park. Nice RMC, I liked the kiddie coaster combination with the ferris wheel. Looks lovely. 

   

  You already said the foliage is a weakness and I think that is definitely something to work on. Check out Liampie´s Foliage do´s and dont´s in the forum or watch the youtubevideo´s from Deurklink. Simple things like, making the vines a natural green or adding some shrubs around trees, will make a huge difference. You can learn a lot in a small time. In general I already liked your landscaping so I think it won´t be hard to enhance your skills. 

   

  Park layout-wise, I'd suggest trying to make the paths a little less straightforward. Vary a bit, make some curves. In general: squares are for squares and curve is the word.

   

  Just keep going forward man. 

  posted 2 years ago

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  Liampie Offline

  Typical charming map from you! I voted 40%, because I find it just a bit too simple to get into accolade territory - not that that's why you're playing.

   

  I would like to see you scale things up a little bit. Larger park with multiple areas, wider paths, and a few bigger buildings (but not too many, the small buildings suit you). Hit me up on discord if you want some tips at some point.

   

  In either case looking forward to your next piece!

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  Cocoa Offline

  I actually quite enjoyed this. definitely understated and small-scale, but it was actually super charming and the bits of archy and bridges and stuff there really sold the vibe for me. I also appreciated that you kept the rmc smaller and cleaner. so often people use it as an excuse for spaghetti and it just looks stupid.

  posted 2 years ago

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