Park / Jetstream

04-July 09

Park_605 Jetstream

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Nokia Offline

well i submitted this to rctavenged back in like march? maybe it was april so some of my work isn't the same as it is now but im still really proud of this.
enjoy!

oh and thanks zo for making the logo....well i think you made it...
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Louis! Offline

Sorry about that Nokiaa, we've been having problems behind the scenes

But I really loved this, so simple and beautiful.
posted 16 years ago
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zodiac Offline

yeah, i made the logo. nice park, by the way. it was simple but i liked it.
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CedarPoint6 Offline

That was a nice layout. Interesting unique and still pretty realistic. I'd have loved to see maybe one more inversion in there-- like a zero-g roll especially, but the layout was really nice to watch the whole way through. The surrounding areas were pretty nice, although I would've loved if you could've integrated some of that layout over the path or brought guests into the coaster area. I think that really would've highlighted the ride even more. Anyway, nice design-- hope you'll try another.
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Xophe Offline

Yeah I agree with CP6, it was a nice original layout while maintaining a realistic aspect. On the whole it flowed well although there were a couple of dodgy spots eg the hill after the turn over the water. I really liked the turn just after that, though, going into the s-bend. That was a cool element. The surroundings were good too, the colours were nice and I especially liked the foliage. And as CP6 said, it's a pity you didn't bring any of the paths a bit nearer the track. All in all it was a solid design. Keep it up!
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ACEfanatic02 Offline

Pix plz. Looking at parks is an involved process for some of us.

-ACE
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gir Offline

Really enjoyable layout, but like CP6 I would've liked to see one more inversion. I really want to see more of your work though, it's great.
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Brent Offline
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JJ Offline

Remove the zip from the end of the url and there are pics
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Nokia Offline

thanks for all the feedback guys!

and don't worry there will be more comming soon
maybe something bigger?
posted 16 years ago
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FullMetal Offline

Pretty good, but I'm not sure what you were going for... The logo had a jet on it, but a "jet stream" is weather pattern. And with a picture of a jet in the logo, I was expecting an invert or a flyer. You had a flat named Bloodrush, so I'm assuming it was themed to aviation.

But who cares. It was a cool design! And I do agree with CP6: one more inversion wouldn't have hurt.
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Nokia Offline

well there was a stream in the back, and it was going as fast as a jet?

just be lucky it wasnt called blue thing
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geewhzz Offline

You show a great deal of potential, and remind me of an early Steve.
posted 16 years ago
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Nokia Offline

wow, thank you gee that means a lot!!
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Brent Offline

Yeah I really liked the design, and like others said, I think it could have used another inversion (interlocking corks?), and a better laid out queue with some switchbacks and what not. Just one thing though, thought the beginning was rather odd how it came back up from the drop directly into the lift, rather than even out and then go into the lift like most (all?) B&M's that have that mini-drop out of the station.
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