Screenshot / Wildmouse
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23-November 14
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good stuff. maybe a little too many bushes for my taste beneath the wild mouse. and what is this massive field of black wooden plates about?
^NCSO blacktiles
I'd try to do more to reduce the mass of the default supports, if you want this to look custom supported. It was barely noticeable to me at first. Also, the restroom awnings need either the poles from the ground, or the braces from above, both seems redundant.
I don't think I've seen NCSO from you this good.
Nice job dude. I would be a fan of adding some poles around that station so the beams are a little thicker, given how thick the roof tiles are.
I agree with faas. You really need to spice up your colours. And in my opinion, you really don't need that massive backstage area.
I think that "backstage area" is a perspective issue. It's a roof.
@Thirteen, thank you
that field of blocks are blacktiles like inthemanual said
@inthemanual, perhaps i should add some more custom supports, however i do think it looks good already. i'll try to see what i can do
@Fizzix, looking at it now it does look a tiny bit flimsy. maybe i'll try to change the roof too.
@Faas, TIL my rct is you
@Pokecoaster, like Ling said it's not a backstage area, it's a roof for go-karts (and yes faas you will complain about this, i can sense it. who the fuck cares where i place my shitty motored rides.)
@ling, yep you got it, thanks for pointing it out to the others
i don't care
Faas, you could at least try to be insufferable. I don't think I've ever seen you do anything but dump on gdb's screens.
gdb, your response to Faas's criticism is childish. There are three other positive comments you could be focusing on.
Screen is decent. 55%.
Agree with Tim about the supports; unless you're using the default supports as well then it's better to get rid of all of them I think. I agree about the restroom awnings as well; the braces in their current state are much too high in my opinion. It would be better to have them angled downwards and then an additional horizontal brace level with the awning in my opinion.
As cliche as it may be I think adding the monster truck track over the top of the open wooden roof would help it's solidity. At the moment it really doesn't look much like a roof.
Also, the bushes under the wild mouse are basically redundant; it would look better/make much more sense not to have them there.
Certainly a solid enough screen overall though.
You said the screen was "generic, dull and uninspired", so I'm guessing he meant to call you generic, dull, and uninspired. A weak comeback if I've ever seen one.
Your complaint about the same buildings and rides is valid, it just didn't come across in earlier comments. Also, I think the go karts are inside the building.
I feel like an interpreter. Interjecting some opinion, of course.
Simple but effective support work, so well done on that. The station is tidy too. I like the idea of indoor karts - will they be visible at all via a cutaway roof/wall?
is this hotel any good? i want to make this a section of a resort to give purpouse to the large coaster in such a small park.
I wouldn't have known it was a hotel if you hadn't said so. The tower seems odd, and purposeless. The size of the whole thing is rather small as well, and there's nothing that makes it seem like a hotel. I like the building, don't get me wrong, it just doesn't say "Hotel" to me.
It looks like a scientific or government building. Not nearly big enough to be a hotel, nor does it look like it has anything so basic as suites.
gdb, nice to see you with some new material, and not being swayed by other people's opinions. Looks like you're building for fun. Nice use of the supports for the wildmouse. I like it. Cool looking hotel, though small is true. My only real issue is the palm tree in the middle of your screen, doesn't really belong with the rest of the foliage.