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  posted 9 years ago

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  navalin Offline

  Looks awesome. Just get some benches/lamps/garbage cans in there and it'll look perfect.

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  Poke Offline

  That sandwich is a clever idea. Although I would add an extra word like 'shop' or something at the end of the sign. I'm not a big fan of that big mass of black roof.

  posted 9 years ago

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  bigshootergill Offline

  Nice work gdb. I like how you've offset the shops to break things up a bit, and a great variety of colors and styles that all match together. Can't wait to see the final cut! I smell an accolade coming your way!

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  Coasterbill Offline

  Wow you built this fast... can't wait to see it.

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  Lotte Offline

  thanks for the comments guys!

   

  but this is just a quick update because there has been a small disaster near the coaster Teutonicus! D':

   

  

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  Psi Offline

  So you did build a wingrider, nice!  That's a neat little detail there with the truck on fire.

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  Xeccah Offline

  it's nice, but it feels stale and uninspired texture and color all over the place and it's not that well composed tbh

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  zxbiohazardzx Offline

  little too narrow grey path on the left side of the screen bothers me more then it should...

   

  and i agree the black mass is too big. break it up somehow

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  Cocoa Offline

  I figured out whats annoying me about this screen. Its something to do with the scale of the buildings. Like the blue awnings and the giftshop are really low to the ground, implying a much smaller scale, but the top half of the buildings is bigger. It comes off as strange to me. I always say venture on the side of making arches etc higher than you expect. Also, that giftshop building which is just one big roof just doesn't work for me, especially with the big corrugated metal structure behind it.

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