Screenshot / Concurrenten 3

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 8 years ago

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  Louis! Offline

  really nice and atmospheric

  posted 8 years ago

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  RWE Offline

  I really like this. Pretty unique.

  posted 8 years ago

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  Liampie Offline

  I think you forgot to adjust include foliage to the theme. Don't go all out with tropical crap but a few different trees can help setting this area apart. Or some rock formations.

  posted 8 years ago

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  Poke Offline

  Cool textures and composition.

  posted 8 years ago

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  Austin55 Offline

  The pink structure on the left side is super nice. Really works well.
  
  Some things though, beyond what Liam said about foliage.
  -Bench objects are awful. Find something else
  -Something needs to break up the large roof of the pink bldg
  -Get rid of the bushes and chain link path around the drop tower. Imagine you are on the path or ride, you'd want to see something prettier.
  -Bit hard to tell, but the colors on the coaster are awfully jarring and bright.

  posted 8 years ago

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  robbie92 Offline

  I'm adoring that peach structure to the left of the screen. The placement of the covered arcade right next to an open field is a bit odd, though; I wonder if the gesture of the towers and the arcade would benefit more with being placed up against a paved plaza. Also, I think overlaying one more decorative fence right above where the arcade openings end, just in the same peach, will add a touch of texture that will make the building pop.

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  Jappy Offline

  really nice stuff. I agree with all of the above.

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  Dimi Offline

  Nice architecture and atmosphere, you're improving. But I hate the coaster colours. Two different colours for the track and the same two colours for the supports just doesn't work for me. Also I think the area could benefit from some small colourful details to brighten it up a bit.

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  G Force Offline

  The S&S Tower feels extremely out of place.  Rest is nice, just feels kind of old.

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