Screenshot / Coaster in the Woods

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  posted 7 years ago

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  Bubbsy41 Offline

  Not bad. The foliage definitely feels a bit spammy and random. Try not to use so many different types and change the colors on a few of them because they have green trunks or the wrong color of leafs. The trees are also inside of the coaster track and railroad track. Finally try and touch up the landscaping around the rocks.

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  Supersonic Boy Offline

  Thanks for the critique.  But at the same time XD Not bad but terrible apparently.  Guess its the only way to get better though.  I'm giving the trees a trim, so that should clean it up a bit, since it looks like it simply got too dense for most people.  Not to mention one of the trees in particular seems to merge with other causing them to kinda blend together and lose their definition.  I'll see what I can do.  Also, how would you advise touching up the rocks? Should I just add bushes, and mushrooms around the base?

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  That Guy Offline

  I'm a sucker for heavy forests, so I really like the landscaping here. The atmosphere you've created with the density of the forest and using different objects is unique, and I think you should stick with it. Doing things differently is good. Maybe even raise the land up to make small hill at the top of the screen so that the foliage behind that turn is even more accentuated. 

   

  That being said, we still have to view in ISO so you need to work on your sight lines..balancing what we can see and what we can't. Remove trees to 'highlight' elements and draw the eye. Add trees where you want some mystery. 

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