Screenshot / Land of Dreams - Entrance

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • G Force%s's Photo
    You really need to reduce your 1k map racks usage in your archy. Nice tho.
  • FredD%s's Photo

    Great work dude. 

  • SSSammy%s's Photo

    this looks bangin

  • Sven%s's Photo
    This looks good, not a fan of the racks on the white building tough.
  • Louis!%s's Photo

    i'd rather see a different path than the dirt/roof texture. I'd got for tarmac or maybe crazy.

  • shogo%s's Photo
    Youre this weird amalgamation between liam and fisch and i sort of love it, especially with this screen.
  • Bubbsy41%s's Photo

    The map racks are overdone on the arch.  Try and find something else.  Maybe add the mulch object for the trees because right now the dirt just blends with the path.

  • trav%s's Photo

    I think you need to cut down on your repetitive detailing on the architecture, whether that's the map racks or the signs or the squares or whatever. For me, it really detracts from the architecture and ruins any sort of atmosphere or immersion you may otherwise have. 

  • GammaZero%s's Photo

    You really need to reduce your 1k map racks usage in your archy. Nice tho.

  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo

    Same as RCTgo, looks great and I am looking forward to see more! Keep it up!

  • alex%s's Photo

    I agree with Trav a bit. Don't be afraid to have more plain surfaces in the architecture. Also there is a bit of an imbalance between the colourful bright structures and the dull paths/planters. Maybe you need some bright flowers and some AwningsAndShit.

  • Julow%s's Photo

    I agree with G Force about park maps and Alex about the planters. Otherwise, it looks lovely. It's maybe a bit square but I'm sure you will bring some details that will detract our eyes from it. 

  • RWE%s's Photo

    Thank you for all the comments. I agree i should work a little bit more with different objects and add some more brightness to the path. I'm also still trying out different path textures. All in all i'm glad most of the comments are very positive!

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